Describe a famous person you're interested in.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

Repetition of ideas, such as mentioning Shah Rukh Khan's acting skills multiple times.

Try to introduce new aspects or details about Shah Rukh Khan instead of repeating the same information. You could talk about his philanthropic activities, business ventures, or specific roles that have impacted you.

Incorrect use of the phrase 'in the industries'.

Use 'in the industry' instead, as it refers to the film industry specifically.

Awkward phrasing in 'than with his fans'.

Rephrase to 'as well as with his fans' to maintain parallel structure.

Use of 'Saree-Ka-Pallu' without context.

Provide a brief explanation for phrases that might not be universally understood, such as 'holding the Saree-Ka-Pallu' which means showing respect and care.

Lack of cohesive devices to improve flow.

Incorporate connectors like 'Furthermore', 'In addition', and 'Moreover' to enhance the coherence of the response.

Incorrect article usage in 'a founder of Tesla'.

Use 'the founder of Tesla' as it specifies a particular person.

Incorrect use of 'a quite impressive guy'.

Use 'quite an impressive guy' for correct article placement.

Incorrect number in 'his net worth is about 427 million'.

The correct figure is in billions, so it should be '427 billion'.

Incorrect tense in 'no one believes'.

Use past tense 'no one believed' to maintain consistency.

Lack of cohesive devices.

Incorporate cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Moreover', and 'In conclusion' to improve flow.

Incorrect use of 'which' instead of 'who' when referring to people.

Use 'who' instead of 'which' when referring to people. For example, 'people who are famous.'

Subject-verb agreement error in 'He also do some volunteer works.'

Use 'does' instead of 'do' to match the singular subject. It should be 'He also does some volunteer work.'

Incorrect use of 'people from poor castles.'

The term 'castles' seems incorrect here. Consider using 'backgrounds' or 'communities' instead.

Incorrect use of 'red letter day.'

The phrase 'red-letter day' is correctly used, but consider explaining why it is significant to enhance the description.

Repetition and lack of cohesive devices.

Use cohesive devices like 'Moreover,' 'Additionally,' or 'Furthermore' to connect ideas and reduce repetition.

Repetition of ideas, such as Adarsh Sharma being natural and happy.

Try to introduce new ideas or details instead of repeating the same points. For example, you could discuss her impact on the film industry or a specific movie role she is known for.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'even'.

Use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'moreover,' 'furthermore,' and 'in addition' to enhance the flow of your response.

Lack of structured storytelling.

Organize your response by starting with how you became interested in her, then describe her current influence, and finally speculate on her future projects.

Limited use of descriptive vocabulary.

Incorporate more vivid adjectives and expressions, such as 'charismatic,' 'captivating,' or 'inspirational,' to make your description more engaging.

The phrase 'I'm gonna talk about' is informal for IELTS. 'I'm going to discuss' would be more appropriate.

Use 'I'm going to discuss' instead of 'I'm gonna talk about' for a more formal tone.

The name 'Vidar Kohli' is incorrect. The correct name is 'Virat Kohli.'

Ensure that the names of famous personalities are spelled correctly.

The phrase 'hard-working personalities' should be 'hard-working personality.'

Use 'hard-working personality' for correct subject-verb agreement.

The phrase 'brought India in epitome' is awkward and unclear.

Consider rephrasing as 'elevated India's status in cricket.'

The use of 'such a generous' is incomplete.

Use 'such a generous person' or 'so generous' for clarity.

The phrase 'makes different from other people' lacks clarity.

Rephrase as 'sets him apart from others.'

The phrase 'I'm also being keen to know more' is awkward.

Use 'I am also keen to learn more' for better clarity.

The phrase 'this kind of personalities makes way' is grammatically incorrect.

Use 'this kind of personality makes a way' for correct subject-verb agreement.

The sentence 'the legacy when we follow is such a good and important for the future generation also' is awkward.

Rephrase as 'following such a legacy is important for future generations.'

The name 'Dukler Sundman' might be a mispronunciation or typo, as it is not a widely recognized name.

Ensure that the name of the famous person is correctly spelled and recognized to avoid confusion.

The phrase 'He is the only one person who I inspired' is incorrect.

Use 'He is the only person who inspires me.'

Repetition of 'He is my inspiration.'

Avoid repetition by using synonyms or rephrasing. For example, 'He serves as a great source of motivation for me.'

The sentence 'I used to talk with him day by day.' is unclear.

Clarify the context. For example, 'I follow his updates regularly.'

Incorrect use of 'automatic girls will follow you.'

Rephrase to 'success will naturally attract others to you.'

The phrase 'he is very quite interesting' is awkward.

Use 'he is quite interesting' or 'he is very interesting.'

The use of 'he always guide us' lacks subject-verb agreement.

Use 'he always guides us.'

The sentence 'And he also give some important tips' lacks subject-verb agreement.

Use 'And he also gives some important tips.'

The phrase 'how overall consequences faced by him' is unclear.

Rephrase to 'the challenges he has overcome in his life.'

The sentence 'And he is my inspiration and he is only one person.' is repetitive and unclear.

Combine ideas for clarity: 'He is my sole inspiration and a unique individual.'

Use of 'describe about' is incorrect. 'Describe' should be used without 'about'.

Use 'describe Mahendra Singh Dhoni' instead.

The phrase 'I became fond of him since my childhood' contains incorrect tense usage.

Use 'I have been fond of him since my childhood' to indicate an ongoing state.

Repetition of the word 'fond' and phrase 'so fond of him'.

Use synonyms like 'admired', 'was captivated by', or 'was inspired by' to add variety.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'so' and 'but'.

Incorporate connectors like 'therefore', 'however', or 'as a result' for better flow.

Sentence 'Then he then came on, became the captain of Indian cricket' is awkward.

Rephrase to 'He later became the captain of the Indian cricket team'.

The phrase 'he used to give helicopter shots' is not idiomatic.

Use 'he was known for his signature helicopter shots'.

The phrase 'One of the most favourite person I am interested in Arujit Singh' is not grammatically correct.

It should be 'One of my most favorite people is Arijit Singh.'

The sentence 'he basically known as a good singer for the Bollywood because he did lots of hit on Bollywood songs' lacks proper grammar.

It should be 'he is basically known as a great singer in Bollywood because he has many hit Bollywood songs.'

Use of 'I know him when I was class 12' is incorrect.

It should be 'I got to know him when I was in class 12.'

The phrase 'he sang a song on that movie' is incorrect.

It should be 'he sang a song in that movie.'

The sentence 'Most of the time he used to do concert outside India' is awkwardly phrased.

It should be 'He often performs concerts outside India.'

The sentence 'I was full of beans throughout his concert' is informal.

Consider using 'I was extremely excited throughout his concert.'

The phrase 'some favourite song of mine' is not properly structured.

It should be 'some of my favorite songs.'

The sentence 'he never disappoint his fandom' lacks subject-verb agreement.

It should be 'he never disappoints his fans.'

The phrase 'Whenever a person go to take an autograph, he definitely give him anyhow' is incorrect.

It should be 'Whenever someone asks for an autograph, he always gives it.'

The phrase 'idol of many youngs' is incorrect.

It should be 'idol for many young people.'

Incorrect usage of tense in 'In 2014 he has withdrawn from the captaincy from Test Cricket.'

Use the past simple tense: 'In 2014, he withdrew from the captaincy of Test Cricket.'

Repetition of the phrase 'one of the.'

Try using synonyms or paraphrasing, such as 'a leading figure' or 'a prominent individual.'

Awkward phrasing in 'Me and my friends, we used to watch cricket at the same time.'

Use 'My friends and I used to watch cricket together.'

Incorrect article usage in 'We got permission from that who runs the auditorium.'

Use 'We got permission from the person who runs the auditorium.'

Lack of cohesive devices in the narrative.

Use connectors like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' 'In addition,' and 'Furthermore' to improve flow.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'but.'

Consider using alternatives such as 'however,' 'although,' and 'therefore.'

Inconsistent subject-verb agreement in 'India ever produced by delivering three ICC trophies.'

Use 'India has ever produced, having delivered three ICC trophies.'

The response does not provide any relevant content related to the question asked.

Take a moment to think about a famous person you admire. Consider aspects like their achievements, why they are famous, and how they have influenced you. Use the preparation time to jot down key points using the 5W+1H method (Who, What, When, Where, Why, How) to structure your response.