Describe someone older than you whom you admire.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

The use of 'which' instead of 'whom' when referring to a person.

Use 'whom' instead of 'which' when talking about a person.

The phrase 'none other than but my mother' is awkward.

Use 'none other than my mother' for clarity.

The phrase 'For couple of weeks' is missing an article.

Use 'For a couple of weeks' to be grammatically correct.

The sentence 'she gives up on her' is unclear and awkward.

Clarify who 'her' refers to and rephrase for clarity, such as 'she feels like giving up on herself.'

Repeated use of 'which' instead of 'who' when referring to a person.

Use 'who' instead of 'which' when referring to people.

The phrase 'it is very proud to say' is awkward.

Rephrase to 'I am very proud to say.'

The phrase 'an inspiration person' is incorrect.

Use 'an inspirational person' for correct adjective use.

The phrase 'more confident enough' is redundant.

Use either 'more confident' or 'confident enough'.

Incorrect use of 'scare' in 'She doesn't scare about anything.'

Use 'isn't scared of anything' instead.

Incorrect article usage in 'the Hollywood'.

Omit 'the' and say 'Hollywood'.

The sentence 'Not only in the studies but also in her career.' lacks a main clause.

Combine it with the previous sentence for clarity.

Awkward phrasing in 'I lost where I am.'

Use 'I lose myself' or 'I feel mesmerized'.

The phrase 'influences the people mind' is incorrect.

Use 'influences people's minds'.

Repetition of 'she is the one who has, who was living the life properly, completely.'

Rephrase to 'she lives her life fully and properly'.

The phrase 'older to me' is incorrect. The correct phrase should be 'older than me.'

Use 'older than me' instead of 'older to me.'

The use of 'yeah' is informal and repetitive.

Try to reduce the use of informal fillers like 'yeah' and instead use more formal expressions like 'indeed' or 'certainly.'

Repetition of the idea 'he is older than me' and 'our age difference is about... 60 years.'

Avoid repeating the same idea. You can combine these into one sentence for clarity and conciseness.

The expression 'older to me' and 'by the way' are informal and not suitable for formal speaking.

Replace informal expressions with more appropriate connectors such as 'interestingly' or 'notably.'

The phrase 'a violin player that he had' is unclear.

Clarify whether you mean 'a violin that he played' or 'a collection of violin music that he owned.'