Describe an energetic person that you know: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

Repetition of words and phrases such as 'like' and 'make managing the task make.'

Try to use a variety of expressions to avoid repetition. For example, replace 'like' with 'such as' or 'for instance.'

Grammatical errors such as incorrect verb agreement in 'when he wake up.'

Ensure subject-verb agreement by using 'wakes up' instead of 'wake up.'

Use of vague expressions like 'managing both the things.'

Be more specific by saying 'balancing his professional responsibilities with household duties.'

Lack of cohesive devices and structured storytelling.

Use cohesive devices like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' and 'In conclusion' to structure your response and guide the listener through your narrative.

Overuse of simple connectors such as 'and' and 'so.'

Try using more varied connectors such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' and 'As a result.'

Incorrect use of articles, for example, 'the more most energetic person.'

Use 'the most energetic person' instead of 'the more most energetic person.'

Repetition of ideas and lack of specific examples.

Try to provide more specific examples of your mother's energetic nature. For instance, describe a particular situation where her energy was evident, or mention activities she engages in that showcase her vitality.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'because'.

Use more varied connectors such as 'moreover', 'in addition', or 'furthermore' to improve the flow of your response.

Subject-verb agreement issue in 'people throughout my life who has more energetic.'

It should be 'people throughout my life who are more energetic.'

Incorrect use of 'next to my neighbor's house.'

It should be 'next door to my neighbor's house.'

Repetitive use of 'more energetic.'

Use synonyms like 'full of energy' or 'highly active.'

Incorrect use of 'multi-tasker person.'

It should be 'a multitasker.'

Incorrect use of 'do some exercise and yoga.'

It should be 'does some exercise and yoga.'

Incorrect use of 'goes for their secondary education.'

It should be 'goes for his secondary education.'

Redundant phrase 'returning back home.'

Use 'returning home.'

Incorrect use of 'assist his father in their business.'

It should be 'assist his father in his business.'

Incorrect use of 'take care of their grandparents.'

It should be 'takes care of his grandparents.'

Incorrect use of 'goes for gym.'

It should be 'goes to the gym.'

Incorrect use of 'proud on him.'

It should be 'proud of him.'

Incorrect use of 'appreciate him about their work.'

It should be 'appreciate him for his work.'

Inconsistent use of pronouns ('his,' 'their').

Ensure consistent use of pronouns like 'his.'

The response does not address the question asked, which is to describe an energetic person.

Focus on describing a specific energetic person you know, mentioning their characteristics, behaviors, and why you find them energetic.

There is a lack of cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

Use connectors such as 'However,' 'Moreover,' or 'On the other hand' to improve the flow of ideas.

The word 'advertise' is used incorrectly instead of 'advertisement.'

Use 'advertisement' when referring to ads or commercials.

The sentence structure is fragmented and lacks clarity.

Break down the sentences into clear, concise statements. For example, 'Advertisements often interrupt movies, which can be frustrating. However, they are designed to capture attention.'

The phrase 'none but' is awkward and uncommon in this context.

Use 'none other than' or simply 'my best friend Lakshmi'.

The word 'besides' is incorrectly used.

Use 'beside' to indicate 'next to'.

Repetitive use of 'and' in the sentence.

Try to vary sentence structure by using connectors like 'then', 'afterwards', or 'subsequently'.

The sentence 'But when Lakshmi came and she greeted me and she smiled at me and she also asked my permission to sit besides me.' is overly long and lacks clarity.

Break it into shorter sentences for better clarity and use of connectors like 'then' or 'after that'.