Describe the type of home you'd like to reside in.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

The phrase 'apartment house' is not commonly used. It would be clearer to say 'apartment' or 'flat'.

Consider using 'apartment' or 'flat' instead of 'apartment house'.

The phrase 'content feeling' is awkward.

Use 'sense of contentment' instead of 'content feeling' for better clarity.

Repetitive use of 'calm and content'.

Try using synonyms like 'peaceful and satisfied' to avoid repetition.

The sentence 'I am a very keen reader and I currently own a lot of books, so I do require space to put those in place, and also a small area dedicated to a puja room.' is quite long and could be split for clarity.

Consider breaking this into two sentences for better readability. For example, 'I am a keen reader and own many books, so I need space for them. Additionally, I would like a small area dedicated to a puja room.'

The response lacks clear structure and coherence, making it difficult to follow the ideas presented.

Consider organizing your response using a clear structure. Start by describing the type of home, then detail specific features like room sizes and outdoor space. Use cohesive devices such as 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' and 'In addition' to guide the listener through your description.

There is a repetition of the word 'big' and 'very big,' which detracts from the richness of the vocabulary.

Try to use a variety of descriptive words. Instead of 'big,' consider using synonyms like 'spacious,' 'expansive,' or 'ample.'

The word 'furnitures' is incorrect.

Use 'furniture' instead, as it is an uncountable noun.

The sentence is overly long and lacks punctuation, which affects readability and understanding.

Break down long sentences into shorter ones to improve clarity. Use commas and full stops to separate ideas.

Repetitive use of 'which is surrounded by' and 'so that I'.

Try to vary your sentence structure to avoid repetition. For example, you could say, 'I envision a home nestled among mountains and lush greenery, far from pollution and the hustle and bustle of metropolitan life.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'so'.

Incorporate more varied connectors such as 'moreover,' 'furthermore,' or 'in addition' to improve the flow of your ideas.

Incorrect use of indefinite article 'a' with 'backyard' and 'garden'.

Use 'a' only when you are introducing something for the first time. You could say, 'I want a backyard and a garden where I can grow groceries and plants.'

Lack of cohesive structure in storytelling.

Structure your response by starting with your current situation, then describe your dream home, and finally explain how it would change your life in the future.

The phrase 'small home with gardening' lacks an article. It should be 'a small home with a garden.'

Use articles appropriately to specify nouns, such as 'a small home with a garden.'

The sentence 'Because I was born and raised in small buildings, so I want to lead my life according to the fact that I want to take a small house in my hometown' is not grammatically correct.

Avoid using 'because' and 'so' together. Instead, say 'Since I was born and raised in small buildings, I want to lead my life in a similar way by choosing a small house in my hometown.'

Repetition of the word 'small' and 'home' throughout the response.

Try to use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition, such as 'compact' or 'cozy residence.'

The phrase 'most of them are preferring smaller homes due to rise in economic prices' is awkward.

Rephrase to 'many people prefer smaller homes due to the rising cost of living.'

The sentence 'And sayings also say that small house is a happy family and happy home' lacks coherence.

Rephrase for clarity: 'As the saying goes, a small house often means a happy family and a happy home.'

The sentence 'And companies like Happy Homes and Small Homes were started to fulfil the middle class family's wish by building a home with affordable manner' is unclear.

Rephrase to 'Companies like Happy Homes and Small Homes have been established to fulfill the wishes of middle-class families by offering affordable housing.'

The response lacks structure and coherence, making it difficult to follow.

Try organizing your response by using structured storytelling techniques, such as starting with the type of home, moving to the location, and concluding with the benefits. Use cohesive devices like 'First of all,' 'Moreover,' and 'In conclusion' to improve the flow.

Repetitive use of the phrase 'compact apartment' and 'easy to maintain.'

Use synonyms or paraphrased versions such as 'small flat,' 'manageable home,' or 'low-maintenance residence' to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Incorrect use of articles and sentence fragments.

Ensure proper use of articles, such as 'a' and 'the.' For example, 'a compact home' should be 'the compact home' when referring to a specific preference. Avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter, complete sentences.

Use of informal language like 'yeah.'

Replace informal language with more formal expressions. Instead of 'yeah,' you could use 'indeed' or 'certainly.'

The response lacks descriptive vocabulary and expressions.

Incorporate more descriptive vocabulary like 'convenient,' 'strategically located,' and 'family-friendly' to add depth to your description.

There are multiple grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage (e.g., 'When I burn' instead of 'When I was born'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect article usage ('a vintage and fancy homes' should be 'a vintage and fancy home').

Ensure correct tense usage by saying 'When I was born, I always wanted to live in a vintage and fancy home.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use singular or plural forms consistently.

Repetition of ideas, such as mentioning 'I born there' and 'I used to grown up there' multiple times.

Avoid repetition by consolidating ideas. For example, 'I was born and raised in Suryapet, where I have many cherished memories with family and friends.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'so.'

Use varied connectors to enhance cohesion, such as 'Additionally,' 'Moreover,' or 'As a result.'

Lack of structured storytelling and descriptive vocabulary.

Organize the response by describing the past, present, and future. Use descriptive words like 'charming,' 'nostalgic,' or 'architectural beauty' to enhance the narrative.

The response lacks structure and coherence, making it difficult to follow. The ideas are jumbled and do not flow logically.

Begin by introducing the type of home you desire, then explain the reasons for your choice, and conclude with how you envision living there. Use cohesive devices like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' and 'Finally' to structure your answer more clearly.

There are several instances of incorrect or awkward phrasing, such as 'find relax and confident' and 'I do workout any time.'

Use correct expressions such as 'find relaxation and confidence' and 'I work out regularly.'

Repetition of phrases like 'it would be a wooden house' and the overuse of 'and' as a connector.

Paraphrase to avoid repetition, and use a variety of connectors like 'Additionally,' 'Furthermore,' or 'As well as' to enhance the flow.

The response lacks descriptive vocabulary and expressions.

Incorporate more descriptive words such as 'tranquil,' 'breathtaking,' or 'spacious' to paint a vivid picture of your ideal home.

The response lacks a conclusion or closing statement.

Conclude your response by summarizing your thoughts or expressing how living in such a home would impact your life.

Repetition of words and phrases such as 'surrounding it' and 'by the banks of river.'

Try to avoid repeating phrases by using synonyms or rephrasing. For instance, you could say, 'I prefer lavish houses with abundant greenery, ideally located by a riverbank.'

Incorrect use of 'crowdy.'

The correct term is 'crowded.' You could say, 'it's not crowded, so I can feel at ease.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and.'

Incorporate more varied connectors such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' or 'Moreover' to improve the flow.

Inconsistent use of tense, such as 'I'll have peace of mind over there.'

Maintain a consistent tense. You could say, 'I would have peace of mind there.'

Self-correction and repetition, such as 'I'd love to be, live there.'

Plan your response during preparation time to minimize self-correction. Consider structuring your thoughts clearly before speaking.

The response lacks coherence and clarity due to contradictory statements, such as a house being on both a mountain and a beach.

Consider using a structured approach to describe your ideal home. Start by mentioning the location, then describe the features and what makes it special. Ensure the details are consistent and logical.

The use of 'Yeah' at the beginning of a sentence is informal and should be avoided in a formal speaking test.

Replace informal fillers like 'Yeah' with more formal expressions or simply omit them to maintain a professional tone.

The phrase 'how my house is going to look like' is incorrect.

Use 'how my house is going to look' or 'what my house is going to look like' instead.

The response includes self-correction and unfinished thoughts, such as 'I have another friend who, you know, is trying to... I don't know.'

Try to organize your thoughts before speaking. Use the 1-minute preparation time to outline your ideas clearly.

The phrase 'As I am belonging to an average family' is incorrect. 'Belonging' should be replaced with 'belong' to maintain proper tense usage.

Use 'As I belong to an average family' for correct tense usage.

The sentence 'I like to live in a small house which is made up of bricks and on the walls, the walls are covered with mud' is repetitive and lacks coherence.

Rephrase to: 'I would like to live in a small brick house with mud-covered walls.'

Overuse of 'and' in sentences, leading to run-on sentences.

Break down sentences and use connectors like 'Moreover,' 'Additionally,' or 'Furthermore' for better flow.

The phrase 'when I wake up in the morning and I feel healthy' lacks clarity.

Rephrase to: 'When I wake up in the morning, I feel refreshed and healthy.'

The phrase 'and there I feel very good' lacks specificity.

Use descriptive language: 'and there, I feel a sense of tranquility and well-being.'