Weekend Getaway Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details for the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Some grammatical errors present, such as 'Sharp at 6 am' and missing articles, but they do not significantly impede understanding.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability and understanding.
Organization:
Basic structure is present with an introduction, body, and closing, but transitions are minimal and ideas are listed.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line and inconsistent use of email conventions, but greeting and closing are present.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context; words are used correctly and convey the intended meaning.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses all the required themes: details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements, with supporting details provided.
Grammar:
Some grammatical errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms, but they do not significantly hinder understanding.
Spelling:
Contains three spelling errors: 'ooty' should be capitalized, 'its' should be 'it’s', and 'hotel' should be 'a hotel'.
Organization:
The email is well-organized with a clear introduction, logical sequence, and smooth transitions between ideas.
Email Convention:
The email lacks a subject line, but includes a greeting, body, and closing. The tone is appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, with varied and precise word choices.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Word count (99) is between 50-120 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'i' instead of 'I' and 'u' instead of 'you'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but ideas are not smoothly transitioned.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent use of email conventions, missing proper capitalization in salutation and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting ideas.
Grammar:
Some grammatical errors present, such as 'please free feel' and 'Hopping to hear', but they do not significantly hinder understanding.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors identified.
Organization:
Basic structure with introduction, body, and closing, but transitions are minimal.
Email Convention:
Lacks a subject line and the closing 'Lovely Regards' is non-standard.
Vocabulary Range:
Vocabulary is limited with some imprecise expressions.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors present, such as 'this getaway is gonna be' and 'Attaching you all the details'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'gonna'.
Organization:
Some organization present but transitions between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with an appropriate greeting, body, and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect prepositions, but do not hinder comprehension.
Spelling:
Three spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
Clear purpose, logical sequence, and smooth transitions are present.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line. Greeting and closing present but tone is somewhat informal.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to context.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical error in 'we will hiking', but it does not hinder readability.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors present.
Organization:
Well-structured with logical presentation and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Missing proper sign-off and inconsistent capitalization in 'with regards'.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Word count (105) is between 50-120 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as run-on sentences, but readability is not hindered.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
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Form:
Word count (100) is between 50-120 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'your' instead of 'you're'.
Spelling:
Three spelling or typing errors: 'though' instead of 'thought', 'beak' instead of 'break', 'your' instead of 'you're'.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Word count (99) is between 50–120 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Hi Priya, Hope you're doing well I'm planning a quick weekend getaway to Rishikesh from 20th to 22nd June, and I'd love for you to join me. It'll be the perfect break from our busy schedules. Details of the getaway: We'll leave Delhi early Saturday morning and stay at a riverside resort for 2 nights. The weather is pleasant there now, and the place is surrounded by hills and the Ganga. We'll be back by Sunday evening. Activities: I've planned river rafting on Saturday afternoon and a sunrise trek to Kunjapuri Temple on Sunday. Arrangements: I've already booked a twin-sharing cottage, so you just need to pack light. We'll take my car and split the fuel cost. Take care, [Your Name]