Weekend Getaway Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“You are planning a weekend getaway and want to invite your friend to join you. Write an email to your friend. Your email should include the following three themes: -details of the getaway -activities -arrangements Include all three themes and provide supporting ideas.”

30 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 9/15

Dear Friend I am writing this email to discuss a weekend getaway plan. I am planning a weekend getaway with all our friends, and I would like to invite you to join us this weekend. The plan is, firstly, that we all will be assembling at a common place, Sharp at 6 am and from there we will be boarding a pre-booked bus to Murthal where we will be having breakfast at the famous Sukhdev Dhaba. Secondly, from there we will be going towards Manali where we will be doing Go-karting and skiing. Then on Sunday afternoon we will be returning. All the arrangements and bookings are in process I hope to have your benign presence with us on our trip. Kind regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details for the getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Some grammatical errors present, such as 'Sharp at 6 am' and missing articles, but they do not significantly impede understanding.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability and understanding.

Organization:

Basic structure is present with an introduction, body, and closing, but transitions are minimal and ideas are listed.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line and inconsistent use of email conventions, but greeting and closing are present.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context; words are used correctly and convey the intended meaning.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Soni, I hope you are doing well, I am planning a weekend getaway to ooty on 18 and 19 July, and I would love for you to join me. We will stay at comfortable hotel near the lake and enjoy the pleasant weather. During the trip, we can visit the botanical garden, take a boat ride on Ooty lake and explore the market and enjoy some delicious food. its will be a great opportunity to relax and spend time together. I am planning to book the train tickets and hotel this week. Please let me know you are available, so I can make all the necessary arrangements. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses all the required themes: details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements, with supporting details provided.

Grammar:

Some grammatical errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms, but they do not significantly hinder understanding.

Spelling:

Contains three spelling errors: 'ooty' should be capitalized, 'its' should be 'it’s', and 'hotel' should be 'a hotel'.

Organization:

The email is well-organized with a clear introduction, logical sequence, and smooth transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, but includes a greeting, body, and closing. The tone is appropriate.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, with varied and precise word choices.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Maria, I'm planning a weekend getaway and I really want to invite you to join me on this plan, since I'm really looking forward to all of us spending some time together taking time out from our busy schedule and day to day issues and relax sometime reminiscing old times. I am mentioning the details of the getaway below Location; ICT hotels west east coast Day and date; 25th December to 30th December Activities: rafting, swimming, karoke, dancing, fashion show, dress up, BBQ and yoga. This getaway will be incomplete without you i hope u come and we spend this weekend together. warm regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (99) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'i' instead of 'I' and 'u' instead of 'you'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but ideas are not smoothly transitioned.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, missing proper capitalization in salutation and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Charles, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this email to invite you for this long weekend getaway. Firstly, I am planning to go for camping on Friday night. Additionally, we can take some cards games and outdoor activities tools with us. Furthermore, we can do some water activities like kayaking and river rafting next day. If you have any other idea for activities please free feel to let me know. Lastly, we will take some clothes, tent and firewood and barbecue for the spots. I wish you will definitely come to enjoy and relax. Hopping to hear from you soon. Lovely Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting ideas.

Grammar:

Some grammatical errors present, such as 'please free feel' and 'Hopping to hear', but they do not significantly hinder understanding.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors identified.

Organization:

Basic structure with introduction, body, and closing, but transitions are minimal.

Email Convention:

Lacks a subject line and the closing 'Lovely Regards' is non-standard.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited with some imprecise expressions.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Pink, How's life? I hope you're well and healthy. I'm planning for a weekend getaway since it's been nearly a couple of months we spent our time together this getaway is gonna be a big relief for our stressful lives. So please don't say any excuses, I will have to really meet my best friend. Attaching you all the details about the getaway. We will be meeting near PRISM PUB and we'll drive away to KERALA covering 200km. I've booked a luxury stay in a villa in WAYANAD. The package covered 6 course meals 3 times a day and tons of dry and wet games. Let's have fun join me girl. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors present, such as 'this getaway is gonna be' and 'Attaching you all the details'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'gonna'.

Organization:

Some organization present but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with an appropriate greeting, body, and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Chirag, I hope you are doing well ! I am planning relaxing getaway to Coorg starting from 11th May to 15th May and would love you to join me. I have booked the stay for 4 people overlooking the coffee plantation. I've planned some fun activities too, during our stay. We can also spend sometime exploring local market, sightseeing and trekking in the coffee plantation. Regarding arrangements, I will be driving down so I can pick you up from your home. We can split the cost of fuel and other expenses during our stay. Looking forward for relaxing getaway with you. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect prepositions, but do not hinder comprehension.

Spelling:

Three spelling or typing errors detected.

Organization:

Clear purpose, logical sequence, and smooth transitions are present.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line. Greeting and closing present but tone is somewhat informal.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to context.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Friend, Hope this email finds you well. It has been quite a while since I have been thinking about a weekend getaway with you. I have planned a weekend at the lake with barbecue and fishing. I would love to have you join me on this trip. We will leave on Friday evening after work in my car and will probably reach our location by 10 in the night. On Saturday we will go fishing, followed by a relaxing barbecue and swimming. On Sunday we will hiking in the forest and begin our return in the afternoon. Hope you can join me on this trip to relive our college days. with regards,
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical error in 'we will hiking', but it does not hinder readability.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors present.

Organization:

Well-structured with logical presentation and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Missing proper sign-off and inconsistent capitalization in 'with regards'.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Sam, I hope my email finds you in a happy mood. Well, amidst our daily hectic schedules let us take out some time to relax our soul and for the same reason I have planned a weekend getaway this coming Friday. We will depart from my place sharp 8AM towards Ranchi Havana Resort in my car, rooms are already booked a complete day and a night stay at the cozy place with lots of fun activities like games, barbeque, bonfires and opera music as well. It is lavished with luxurious lawn area with exotic foods and beverages. Will wait for you, don't get late. Yours loving [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (105) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as run-on sentences, but readability is not hindered.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Hey Roy, I'm planning a weekend getaway and though it'd be awesome if you could join. I've booked a cabin near the lake from Friday evening to Sunday afternoon. It's peaceful, surrounded by nature and perfect for a beak. We can go hiking, have a barbecue, and maybe even try kayaking! I've arranged the stay and transport. All you need to do is to pack your bags and bring your chill vibes. We'll split the cost, nothing too expensive. Let me know if your free and I'll send you the full plan. Would be great to catch-up and unwind together! Hope you're in! Cheers, [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (100) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'your' instead of 'you're'.

Spelling:

Three spelling or typing errors: 'though' instead of 'thought', 'beak' instead of 'break', 'your' instead of 'you're'.

Organization:

Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation.

SCORE 9/15

Hi Suresh, Hope you're doing good. How is your family doing? The reason I'm writing is I'm planning a weekend getaway and I'm inviting you to join with me. Also, I wanted to let you know that on 25th Saturday morning we will start our journey and then we will have a breakfast at outside after that we will explore the whole city. Another thing is, we will experience the activities like trekking, playing games and shows which are happing in that place. Already I booked a room, and I talked with the manager about food, and I booked tickets for show. Regards, [Your Name]
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AI Feedback

Form:

Word count (99) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

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