Congratulations on an Award: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“Your friend won an award. Write an email congratulating them.”

22 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 14/15

Hi Sam, Hope this email find you well. I learned about your triumph last night and could not hold my excitement. So, I am writing to congratulate you on this victory. I knew this award was going to be yours ever since you participated because you have expertise in that area. I hope your family and other friends are just as excited as I am and by the way, I hope I will soon receive an invitation for a grand celebration for this huge achievement of yours. I am traveling so could not call you but we will surely catch up once I am back in town. Best Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Adequately deals with the topic.

Grammar:

Consistent grammatical control of complex language.

Spelling:

Correct spelling.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of a broad lexical repertoire.

General Linguistic Range:

Smooth mastery of a wide range of language.

Development Structure Coherence:

Good development and logical structure.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Friend, Hope you are doing good. How is your family doing? The reason I am writing this email because I am very happy for you and wants to congratulate to you on your big achievement. Also, I know that you give your hundred percent in your exam, even from last six month you didn't attend any party or social gathering. Another thing is I want a big party when I back to city, we will celebrate it together. Give my love to uncle and aunt, Talk to you soon. Regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Adequately deals with the topic by congratulating the friend.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

Correct spelling.

Vocabulary Range:

Shows a good range of vocabulary but lacks precision in some areas.

General Linguistic Range:

Sufficient range of language to express viewpoints clearly.

Development Structure Coherence:

Some elements are poorly linked, like the transition between congratulating and asking for a party.

SCORE 9/15

Hello dear, First of all, congratulations for winning the award. I am so happy for you. I watched the show, and I was so excited for the results. I always believed that you have the potential for it. We should celebrate this victory so, I am looking forward to meeting you in person. You can choose one day when you will be free, and we have to throw a party. Hoping to meet you soon Yours loving [Your Name]
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AI Feedback

Form:

Word count (76) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task appropriately and sufficiently.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, but does not hinder readability.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, with missing or inappropriate elements.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.

SCORE 8/15

Hello John, I heard one very good news and congratulation for that. Firstly, I want to know the whole story of the competition as this one is the most tough one as we faced before. Furthermore, I heard that all the Ivy-league schools take part here, so the topic also very unique and you must have to prepare well before speaking as all the participants are intellectual. Later, your keen interest in wishing the competition must help you here, what I observed from the beginning. In the conclusion, my heartiest congratulation for you my dear and for your whole team. See you soon and discuss in detail the matter. your lovingly, [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (105) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed with congratulations and interest, but lacks depth.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, but does not hinder readability.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, with missing or inappropriate elements.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.

SCORE 8/15

Dear Sam, I hope my email finds you in a pink health, came to know about your award winning presentation in the conference which was held last week. I am extremely happy to congratulate you on this milestone. "Rome was not build in a day", you have made this phrase come true, it is all your consistent effort and dedication towards your aim which has made you earn this position. I have seen you working day and night and so you deserved it. Last but not the least, wishing for your continuous success and many more achievements ahead. Yours loving [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (97) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task by congratulating the friend on their award.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'Rome was not build' and missing articles.

Spelling:

Three spelling errors: 'in a pink health', 'build', 'Yours loving'.

Organization:

Well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, missing proper closing format.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision in expressions.

SCORE 8/15

Hello Rohit Good Morning i hope you are doing well. I just want to take a moment and congratulate you on winning the noble award this time.this is a testimonial to your hardwork, and recognition of talent, dedication. you have always been a inspiration of passion commitment and hardwork. and it is wonderful to see you had won. once again congratulation on winning the award. wishing you even more success, winnings and achievements. warm regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (71) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task by congratulating the friend on winning an award.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect capitalization and missing articles.

Spelling:

More than two spelling errors, such as 'noble' instead of 'Nobel'.

Organization:

Some organization present but lacks clear transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, missing proper capitalization and punctuation.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 8/15

to mohan, subject : Congratulations on winning the award, dear mohan, I am doing well , I hope you also same. I writing this email to address your recent achievement of winning award for being a best employee. I am really happy to awarded you with the prestigious award. You deserve this award you have been hardworking . at last you got an recognition for your hard work. I am looking forward to see you win more awards in future. yours lovingly, [Your Name]
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Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Adequately deals with the topic of congratulating a friend on winning an award.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

Correct spelling throughout.

Vocabulary Range:

Shows a good range of vocabulary but lacks precision.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Incidental lack of structure and poor linking of elements.

SCORE 8/15

Hi Nick, How are you and your family, I hope you all in a good health . By the way recently I saw the video of your award winning moment . I know you are good at singing . my hearty congratulations! For you wonderful award. And I saw that singing video too!! How beautifully you are singing . I had a awesome voice and I am so proud of you nick. Then when are you coming here , I 'm eagerly waiting to meet you . See you soon... Yours Lovingly , [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (91) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task by congratulating the friend and expressing pride.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect use of articles and punctuation.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling or typing errors, such as 'a awesome voice' instead of 'an awesome voice'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently with some missing punctuation and capitalization errors.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 8/15

Hi Dev, Hope you're doing good. How is your family doing? The reason I am writing this is I was glad to hear this about you won an award and I whole heartedly congratulate you. Also, I wanted to let you know such great moments are call for gatherings and may be you can throw a huge party this weekend. Another thing is, a new restaurant is opening this week near the town. We can all catch up and enjoy. Talk to you soon. Warm regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (80) is between 50–120 inclusive

Content:

Task partially addressed; congratulation expressed but lacks detail

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect sentence structure

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently with missing elements like subject

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety

SCORE 8/15

Dear friend, Hope you are doing well. Recently, I have heard that you have won an award in the office website, I became so excited as soon as I saw that post. In this regard, I would love to congraluate you for your sucess towards the work. It shows your profound knowledge and dedication towards your career. I wish you good luck for your future endeavours. May the lord bless you abundantly. Thank you Thanks & Regards [Your Name]
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AI Feedback

Form:

Word count (75) is within the 50-120 range.

Content:

Fully addresses the task appropriately by congratulating the friend on the award.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'congraluate' and 'sucess'.

Spelling:

Three spelling errors: 'congraluate', 'sucess', 'May the lord'.

Organization:

Well-structured with a logical flow of ideas.

Email Convention:

Correct and appropriate email formatting with proper structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision.

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