Streaming Quality Complaint: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear introduction, explanation, and closing.
Email Convention:
Subject line is missing; greeting and closing are present, tone is appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context of the situation.
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Word count (108) is between 50–120 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of purchase, issues, viewing experience, and request for support/refund.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured, logically presented ideas with smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses a varied and appropriate vocabulary for the given situation.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses all task requirements and includes all required themes with supporting details.
Grammar:
The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
There are no spelling errors, ensuring readability.
Organization:
The email is well-structured with a clear purpose, logical sequence, and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
The email lacks a subject line but includes a greeting and closing with an appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
The vocabulary is appropriate for the context and demonstrates good command.
SCORE 11/15

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AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email clearly addresses the task requirements, including all themes with supporting details about the purchase, viewing experience, and request for support or refund.
Grammar:
The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors, maintaining clarity and coherence.
Spelling:
There are no spelling errors, ensuring the email is clear and easy to read.
Organization:
The email is well-organized with a clear introduction, logical progression of ideas, and smooth transitions, making it easy to follow.
Email Convention:
The email follows standard conventions with a subject line, greeting, body, and closing. The tone is appropriate for a customer service inquiry.
Vocabulary Range:
The vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the context, effectively conveying the issues and requests.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses all required themes: purchase details, viewing experience, and technical support/refund, with supporting details.
Grammar:
Grammar is generally consistent with only occasional errors, such as 'videos stop streaming and is continuously buffering'.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors detected, ensuring readability.
Organization:
The email has a clear introduction, logical sequence, and smooth flow, making it easy to follow.
Email Convention:
The email lacks a subject line, which affects the overall structure, but includes greeting and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, with precise and varied language.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses all required themes: purchase details and issues, viewing experience, and technical support/refund request, with sufficient supporting details.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, maintaining readability.
Organization:
The email is well-structured with a clear introduction, logical flow of ideas, and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Missing a subject line, but greeting and closing are present. The tone is appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, enhancing clarity and precision.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with all required themes: purchase details, viewing experience, and request for support/refund.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses a varied and appropriate vocabulary for the given situation.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with sufficient supporting details.
Grammar:
Grammatical control is consistent with only occasional minor errors.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected, maintaining readability.
Organization:
Ideas are logically sequenced and connected, allowing easy flow for the reader.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line, but greeting and closing are present with appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 11/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task by including all required themes: purchase details, viewing experience, and request for technical support/refund.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors, such as a missing comma in the second sentence.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, none affecting readability.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions between themes.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation, such as 'persistent issues' and 'smooth streaming'.
SCORE 10/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Word count (129) is 121-140 inclusive.
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of purchase, issues, viewing experience, and request for support/refund.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Dear Customer Service Team, I recently purchased a monthly subscription to your streaming service. However, since activating my account, I have been experiencing frequent buffering issues and poor video quality, even while using a stable internet connection. These problems have significantly affected my viewing experience. Videos often pause to load, and the picture quality drops unexpectedly, making it difficult to enjoy the content. I have tried restarting my device, clearing the app cache, and checking my internet connection, but the issues persists. I would appreciate it if your technical support team could investigate this matter and provide a solution as soon possible. Thank you for your attention. I look forward to your response and a quick resolution.