Music Festival Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“A music festival is happening in your city this weekend, and you’d like your friend to go with you. Write an email to your friend. Your email should include the following three themes: - event details - what excites you about it - ticket and transportation arrangements Include all three themes and provide supporting ideas.”

30 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 11/15

Subject: Regarding Music Festival this Weekend at Leisure Valley Chandigarh. Hey Sukhpal, There is a music festival at this Saturday and Sunday. Multiple stages, food stalls and some amazing local and international bands will be performing there. I am especially excited about the late night DJ sets, and chance to soak in live crowd energy. Further, the atmosphere will be electrifying. I have checked the tickets; they are affordable and available online. We can book together to sit in the same section. For transport, I suggest to take metro from sector 17 which will be convenient and cheap. Let's make a fun day out, we are discussing for ages! Cheers, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with all required themes covered: event details, excitement, and ticket/transport arrangements.

Grammar:

Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors, such as 'to take metro' instead of 'taking the metro'.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected, maintaining readability.

Organization:

Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions between themes.

Email Convention:

Correct and appropriate email formatting, including a clear subject line, greeting, body, and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Uses a varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation, including terms like 'electrifying' and 'convenient'.

SCORE 11/15

Dear Jonita, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to check your availability to join me for the "Eclectika" music festival happening on May 30 at Park Square ground. The event is going to be power-packed as Band Ekam is going to be performing live and I've always been their biggest cheerleader. Additionally, the best part is that Papon is launching his exclusive album on the same day, one would kill to witness that live. The ticket costs 2000 which includes complementary snacks as well, making it a great deal. We can book a cab and leave for the venue from my house. I wish to hear from you soon. Catch you later. Best regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Consistent grammatical control with no noticeable errors.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Ideas are logically ordered with clear transitions and a cohesive flow.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line; greeting, closing, and tone are appropriate.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.

SCORE 11/15

Dear Rekha, I hope you are doing well. I was wondering if you would like to join me for the "OPTIKA" music fest happening on this weekend at Park Square, Bangalore. Bands like "One Piece" and "Ekam" are going to perform live and it will be an enthralling experience for sure. Additionally, what I am most excited about is the launch of Papon's latest album "Playdate". He is releasing this album after almost 5 years and I can't wait to witness it. The tickets are available on bookmyshow and we can book a cab from my place to reach the event on time. Let me know what you think. I am waiting to hear from you. Best regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.

Grammar:

Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.

Spelling:

No spelling or typing errors detected.

Organization:

Clear purpose introduced early; ideas follow a logical sequence with appropriate transitions.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line; other conventions like greeting and closing are present but incomplete.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.

SCORE 11/15

Dear Dhruv, I am writing with regards to music festival happening in my city this weekend and I would like you to join me. Music Festival is in JLN Stadium from 7PM onwards on 26th July 2026. Entries will be starting from 6PM onwards. I have bought the tickets for you and myself [Your Name] around Rs 5000 per person. There will be multiple punjabi musicians and I am really excited to hear Jasmine Sandlas and Guru Randhawa live. I will be hearing them the first time. We can drive to the venue. I would urge you to not to miss this. Let me know your plans by this weekend. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement about the event, and ticket/transportation arrangements.

Grammar:

Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors, such as 'music festival happening' instead of 'music festival happening'.

Spelling:

No spelling errors present in the email.

Organization:

The email has a clear introduction, logical flow of ideas, and appropriate grouping of related ideas, making it easy to follow.

Email Convention:

Greeting and closing are present, but there is no subject line, which affects the overall email convention score.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, using terms like 'entries', 'urge', and 'venue'.

SCORE 11/15

Subject: Invitation for music festival this weekend Dear Ana, I would like to invite you to the music festival that is happening in Bangalore this weekend. The festival is on Saturday and Sunday and has live bands on both the days. Most importantly, our favourite band Z is playing on Saturday night. There are also food stalls covering world cusines and I am super excited to go to the event. The tickets are priced at 200 Rs each and we can take a cab to the event. Please let me know if you will be able to join me this weekend. I am looking forward to your response. Yours friendly, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email adequately addresses all required themes: event details, excitement about the event, and ticket/transportation arrangements, with supporting details.

Grammar:

The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with only occasional minor errors.

Spelling:

There are no spelling errors, ensuring clarity and readability.

Organization:

The email has a clear introduction, logical flow of ideas, and smooth transitions, allowing the reader to follow the message effortlessly.

Email Convention:

All email conventions are present and appropriately used, including a subject line, greeting, body, and closing with a suitable tone.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied for the context, showing a good command of language.

SCORE 10/15

Subject: Regarding music festival in Bangalore Hi Hema, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this email to give some details about a music festival that I believe both of us would love it. The event is hosted by the Muzigal team and variety of our favourite singers like Sriram and Ghoshal are performing, which is really exciting. It is happening on 9th June, 2026, Sunday at Phoenix MarketCity, Bangalore, which is around 7KM from my home and we can use my car for the travel. The ticket price is Rs.1000/- per head. If you are interested, lets book tickets in advance as soon as possible, since the tickets are expected to be sold out soon. Yours Lovingly, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.

Grammar:

Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, which do not impact readability.

Organization:

Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear introduction, explanation, and closing, and transitions connect ideas smoothly.

Email Convention:

Email conventions are used correctly with appropriate subject, greeting, body, and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context of the situation.

SCORE 9/15

Hi Friend, I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to tell you that, I would like you to come with me for music festival, which is happening in our city this weekend. Also, I'm very excited to watch the live performance by the popular bands, with there great musical instruments. Furthermore, the music festival will going to start in evening at 5:00 P.M, And this is only for one day event, which is on 28-January-2026. Moreover, the tickets are available on official online portal and free transportation is also arranged by the event organizer for those who have a VIP tickets. Looking forward for your response. Best regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task by including event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect verb forms and article usage, but readability is not hindered.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'there' instead of 'their'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are not smooth.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Subject :- Interested in riverside music fest this Saturday? Hi Shyam There is a music festival this Saturday at Riverside park from 2 pm onwards . I Would be glad if you could come .This includes live concert, a DJ set to close the night. There will be food stalls. What excites me, the most, is local bands playing from 4 to 6 pm and the live concerts . It will be fun to meet old friends and enjoy. I have bought an extra ticket and would like to share.. Please inform me in advance. I can drive and pick you. Cheers, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with event details, excitement, and ticket/transport arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect capitalization and punctuation.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 8/15

Hi Sarah, I hope you are doing well.A music festival is happening in our city next Saturday at City Hall, and I would like to come with me. Many popular bands and singers are going to perform, and there also will be food stalls and fun activities. I am especially excited because our favourite band and singers are going to perform live in the evening. The event is going to start at 4.pm and continues till late-night. I already checked the ticket prices ,and they are quite affordable. we can book them online. For transportation we can travel, together by metro because it is convenient and avoid traffic problems. Please let me know soon because tickets may sell out quickly. I am looking forward to enjoy festival with you . Best regards , [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Fair degree of grammatical control; errors like 'I would like to come' and 'we can travel, together' are present.

Spelling:

Three spelling/typing errors: '4.pm', 'to enjoy', and extra space before ',' in 'Best regards ,' impacting readability.

Organization:

Basic structure present; ideas generally follow a logical order but lack smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line; greeting and closing present, but tone slightly informal.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of appropriate vocabulary for the context.

SCORE 8/15

Dear Friend John. I am doing well and hoping the same for you too. I am writing this email in regard to a musical festival going to happen in my city this weekend. I would be lovely if you could join me for this festival. This festival is one of biggest event going to be happened in my city till now. The most exciting thing of this festival is the Virtual theatre, which is going to show the history of our planet. I have arranged two tickets for us. We will go by car. All the arrangements have been done. This is all what I have done, please provide some ideas to include which can make this festival visit more exciting and memorable for us. Your early response to this context will be highly appreciated Lovingly yours,
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed: event details, excitement, and arrangements.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'a musical festival going to happen' and 'one of biggest event'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present but lacks clear transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions; missing comma after 'Dear Friend John' and incorrect closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

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