Music Festival Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with all required themes covered: event details, excitement, and ticket/transport arrangements.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors, such as 'to take metro' instead of 'taking the metro'.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected, maintaining readability.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions between themes.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including a clear subject line, greeting, body, and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses a varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation, including terms like 'electrifying' and 'convenient'.
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Consistent grammatical control with no noticeable errors.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected.
Organization:
Ideas are logically ordered with clear transitions and a cohesive flow.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; greeting, closing, and tone are appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
Clear purpose introduced early; ideas follow a logical sequence with appropriate transitions.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; other conventions like greeting and closing are present but incomplete.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement about the event, and ticket/transportation arrangements.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors, such as 'music festival happening' instead of 'music festival happening'.
Spelling:
No spelling errors present in the email.
Organization:
The email has a clear introduction, logical flow of ideas, and appropriate grouping of related ideas, making it easy to follow.
Email Convention:
Greeting and closing are present, but there is no subject line, which affects the overall email convention score.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, using terms like 'entries', 'urge', and 'venue'.
SCORE 11/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email adequately addresses all required themes: event details, excitement about the event, and ticket/transportation arrangements, with supporting details.
Grammar:
The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with only occasional minor errors.
Spelling:
There are no spelling errors, ensuring clarity and readability.
Organization:
The email has a clear introduction, logical flow of ideas, and smooth transitions, allowing the reader to follow the message effortlessly.
Email Convention:
All email conventions are present and appropriately used, including a subject line, greeting, body, and closing with a suitable tone.
Vocabulary Range:
The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied for the context, showing a good command of language.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details: event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, which do not impact readability.
Organization:
Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear introduction, explanation, and closing, and transitions connect ideas smoothly.
Email Convention:
Email conventions are used correctly with appropriate subject, greeting, body, and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context of the situation.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task by including event details, excitement, and ticket/transportation arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect verb forms and article usage, but readability is not hindered.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'there' instead of 'their'.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are not smooth.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with event details, excitement, and ticket/transport arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect capitalization and punctuation.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 8/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Fair degree of grammatical control; errors like 'I would like to come' and 'we can travel, together' are present.
Spelling:
Three spelling/typing errors: '4.pm', 'to enjoy', and extra space before ',' in 'Best regards ,' impacting readability.
Organization:
Basic structure present; ideas generally follow a logical order but lack smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; greeting and closing present, but tone slightly informal.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of appropriate vocabulary for the context.
SCORE 8/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed: event details, excitement, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'a musical festival going to happen' and 'one of biggest event'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present but lacks clear transitions between ideas.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent use of email conventions; missing comma after 'Dear Friend John' and incorrect closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Subject: Regarding Music Festival this Weekend at Leisure Valley Chandigarh. Hey Sukhpal, There is a music festival at this Saturday and Sunday. Multiple stages, food stalls and some amazing local and international bands will be performing there. I am especially excited about the late night DJ sets, and chance to soak in live crowd energy. Further, the atmosphere will be electrifying. I have checked the tickets; they are affordable and available online. We can book together to sit in the same section. For transport, I suggest to take metro from sector 17 which will be convenient and cheap. Let's make a fun day out, we are discussing for ages! Cheers, [Your Name]