Congratulations on an Award: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 2

Form:

Word count (73) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed; congratulatory message lacks clarity.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'I want you to congratulate'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, missing a clear closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

The email is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

The email adequately deals with the topic by congratulating the friend.

Grammar:

The email shows a relatively high degree of grammatical control but contains minor errors.

Spelling:

There are more than one spelling errors, such as 'handwork' instead of 'hard work'.

Vocabulary Range:

The email shows a good range of vocabulary for general topics but lacks complexity.

General Linguistic Range:

The email has sufficient range of language to express viewpoints but lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email is incidentally less well-structured, with some elements poorly linked.

Form:

Word count (59) is between 50-120 inclusive

Content:

Task partially addressed; congratulatory message present but lacks detail

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'heard work' instead of 'hard work'

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions and flow are unclear

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently; missing proper greeting and closing

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety

Form:

Word count (134) is 121–140 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task by congratulating the friend on winning an award.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'your' instead of 'you're', but does not hinder readability.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling or typing errors, such as 'Iam' instead of 'I am'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, such as missing subject line and abrupt tone shifts.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (99) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks depth in congratulatory tone.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors present, such as incorrect verb forms.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling errors, such as 'begging' instead of 'beginning'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, with inappropriate elements like 'Your sincerely'.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (76) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task attempted but lacks clarity; topic of congratulating friend is misunderstood.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'the my friend'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, e.g., 'Wram'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently; inappropriate elements like 'Wram greetings'.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and relevance to the task.

Form:

Word count (68) is between 50-120 inclusive

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks clear focus on the award details

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'writing email on you won an award'

Spelling:

Three or four spelling or typing errors, such as 'Im' instead of 'I'm'

Organization:

Some organization present but ideas are not clearly connected

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently with some missing elements like a proper greeting

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety

Form:

Word count (58) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks detail on the award.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'i'm', 'i was', 'congratulating'.

Spelling:

Three errors: 'i'm', 'i', 'great full'.

Organization:

Some organization present but ideas are not clearly linked.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, missing subject line and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

The length of the email is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

The email adequately deals with the topic of congratulating a friend on winning an award.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures with several basic mistakes, such as incorrect verb forms.

Spelling:

More than one spelling error, such as 'exicting' instead of 'exciting'.

Vocabulary Range:

Shows a good range of vocabulary but with some imprecision.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email is incidentally less well-structured with some poorly linked elements.

Form:

Word count (89) is within the 50-120 range.

Content:

Task partially addressed with congratulatory message, but lacks clarity.

Grammar:

Frequent errors such as 'hope you will happy' and 'brighting our distic'.

Spelling:

Multiple spelling errors like 'distic', 'achivement', and 'brighting'.

Organization:

Some organization present but ideas are not clearly connected.

Email Convention:

Has basic structure but lacks a proper greeting and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.