Congratulations on an Award: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“Your friend won an award. Write an email congratulating them.”

22 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 4/15

Dear Ann, How are you? Hope you and your family are doing good. I am writing this email to congratulate you to won national chess competition award 2020. Firstly, I'll like to arrange a small dinner party with our close friends at new hotel in our town. Also, if you are available to conduct a trip to beach, it is expanded to have a three-fold effect for several reasons. Last but not least, birthday party at your place with our close friends and relatives should not be neglected as it can increase the chances of success, effectiveness, and quality of life. I hope to see you soon. Best wishes, [Your Name]

AI Feedback

Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Deals with the topic but omits a major aspect.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

Correct spelling.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Lacks coherence and mainly consists of lists or loose elements.

SCORE 2/15

Hello Ram, I trust your doing great. I am writing this email to discuss about the statement that award you won on cricket tournament. Firstly, we should take into account the importance of date and time of the award, which will contribute to the overall efficiency and well-being of the operations. Also, if we consider the likelihood of the venue, it is expected to take a three-fold effect due to several reasonsincluding the prize you have won and amount you have received from the team. Furthermore, you should not be neglect your focus on sports as it can increase the chances of success, effectivness, quality of life, and a positive environment. I hope to hear from you soon. Regards, [Your Name]

AI Feedback

Form:

Word count (112) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Does not address the task properly due to misinterpretation; irrelevant content about operations and venue.

Grammar:

Frequent errors such as 'your' instead of 'you're', 'neglect' instead of 'neglecting'.

Spelling:

Multiple errors such as 'effectivness' affecting readability.

Organization:

Lacks proper structure; ideas are disjointed and hard to follow.

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