Weekend Getaway Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 2
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details on getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured, logically presented ideas with smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses a varied and appropriate vocabulary for the given situation.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Clear introduction, logical sequence, and smooth transitions guide the reader.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; greeting and closing present with appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with clear supporting details.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear introduction, explanation, and closing.
Email Convention:
Email conventions are correctly used, with a subject, greeting, body, and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All themes are addressed with sufficient supporting details.
Grammar:
Grammatical control is consistent with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability.
Organization:
Ideas are logically sequenced with clear transitions and structure.
Email Convention:
No subject line present, but greeting and closing are appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses the task with some success, but the 'activities' theme is weakly developed.
Grammar:
Grammatical control is generally consistent with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
The email has a basic structure and generally understandable order, but lacks smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Email conventions are used inconsistently; subject line is missing.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Word count (101) is between 50-120 inclusive.
Content:
Task fully addressed with details of getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses the task with some success, covering details and activities but lacks clear arrangements.
Grammar:
Grammar is generally consistent with only minor errors, such as 'forwards' instead of 'forward'.
Spelling:
Contains a maximum of two spelling errors, such as 'forwards'.
Organization:
The email has a basic structure with a clear introduction and closing, but lacks smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Email conventions are used inconsistently; lacks a subject line.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context, with varied expressions.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
Well-structured, logically presented ideas with smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.
SCORE 10/15

AI Feedback
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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured, logically presented ideas with smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Word count (116) is within the 50-120 range.
Content:
Task fully addressed with details of getaway, activities, and arrangements.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'is been' and 'await you to join'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions between ideas.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent use of email conventions; missing subject and informal sign-off.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used but lacks precision and variety.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Hi Priya, Hope you're doing well I'm planning a quick weekend getaway to Rishikesh from 20th to 22nd June, and I'd love for you to join me. It'll be the perfect break from our busy schedules. Details of the getaway: We'll leave Delhi early Saturday morning and stay at a riverside resort for 2 nights. The weather is pleasant there now, and the place is surrounded by hills and the Ganga. We'll be back by Sunday evening. Activities: I've planned river rafting on Saturday afternoon and a sunrise trek to Kunjapuri Temple on Sunday. Arrangements: I've already booked a twin-sharing cottage, so you just need to pack light. We'll take my car and split the fuel cost. Take care, [Your Name]