Project Extension Request: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“You need more time to submit a project. Write an email to your professor explaining your situation.”

30 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 6/15

Dear professor, i am writing this mail to extend my time for the submit ion of my project delayed due to my health issues i am not feeling well so, that i need some more time to submit my project please consider my request and accept my project by the end of this month which will be more helpful for me your sincerely student of 1st year

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Form:

The email is less than 90 words.

Content:

The email adequately addresses the request for an extension due to health issues.

Grammar:

Multiple grammatical errors and lack of punctuation.

Spelling:

Contains more than one spelling error ('submit ion', 'your sincerely').

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is basic but sufficient for the topic.

General Linguistic Range:

Uses basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Email lacks clear structure and logical flow.

SCORE 5/15

SUBJECT - Regarding extension of project submission last date. with reference to subject cited above i would like inform you that i am unbale to complete my project till last date due to my mother emergency surgery of hernia which will affect my working hours on projects. i will not available to attend the project class as mention above, which will lead to affect my project quality. so i request you to kindly extent the last date of submission of project , which lead me to focus on my project quality. yours sincerely

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Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Adequately deals with the topic.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and/or several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

More than one spelling error.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Is incidentally less well-structured, and some elements or paragraphs are poorly linked.

SCORE 5/15

Dear Professor Hope you are doing great, I am requesting more time for submitting my project because I am a little bit busy with other stuff and I have a complicated topic for the project so I consume more time. So I request you to allow me more time to submit my project. Thank you You're Respectfully [Your Name]

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Form:

The length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Deals with the topic but does not deal with one minor aspect, such as providing a specific reason for the delay.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and several basic mistakes, such as 'consume more time' and 'You're Respectfully'.

Spelling:

One spelling error: 'You're Respectfully' should be 'Yours Respectfully'.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email is incidentally less well-structured, lacking clear paragraph separation and transitions.

SCORE 5/15

Hey professor Im requesting you to give me some more time to finish my project. Im facing some technical issues in completing the project, as im trying to get some more information about the project. As im lagging some things. I respectfully as you to give me some time to submit the project

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Form:

Email length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Deals with the topic but does not deal with one minor aspect.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and/or several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

One spelling error.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Is incidentally less well-structured, and some elements or paragraphs are poorly linked.

SCORE 5/15

Subject- Request for extension of project submission Good Morning Sir, Hope your doing fine and good. This is to inform you that i will be taking more time for the submission of my project has my health is not doing fine. Please accept my request, I will be grateful. Your sincerely, [Your Name]

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Form:

The email is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

The email omits a major aspect such as a detailed explanation or deadline request.

Grammar:

Contains several basic grammatical errors, such as 'your' instead of 'you're' and 'has' instead of 'as'.

Spelling:

One spelling error: 'Your' instead of 'You're'.

Vocabulary Range:

Shows a good range of vocabulary but lacks precision and complexity.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email is incidentally less well-structured and lacks clear paragraphing.

SCORE 4/15

Dear Sir I would request you for an additional time for my project to submit, since i unable to make much time to dedicate for the detailed activity, I trust you will understand my request. Yours faithfully [Your Name]

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Form:

The email is less than 30 words.

Content:

The email requests more time but lacks details on the situation and deadline.

Grammar:

Contains basic grammatical mistakes, such as 'i unable' instead of 'I am unable'.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Vocabulary Range:

Limited vocabulary, insufficient for the topic.

General Linguistic Range:

Uses basic language, lacking precision and complexity.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email lacks coherence and structure, with no clear introduction or conclusion.

SCORE 4/15

Dear Professor I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to request an extension on the submission project originally due. Thank you. I look forward to your response. Best regards,

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Form:

Length is less than 30 words.

Content:

Omits a major aspect - does not explain the situation.

Grammar:

Relatively high degree of grammatical control but lacks complexity.

Spelling:

No spelling errors.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient for the topic.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Lacks coherence; consists of loose elements.

SCORE 3/15

Dear Sir I am not able to submit the project due to medical reasons so grant me for some more days Thank You

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Form:

Length is less than 30 words.

Content:

Omits major aspects of the topic such as explanation of the medical reasons and specific request for extension.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and lacks grammatical complexity.

Spelling:

Correct spelling.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range:

Contains mainly basic language and lacks precision.

Development Structure Coherence:

Lacks coherence and mainly consists of loose elements.

SCORE 2/15

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Form:

The response is repetitive and exceeds 120 words.

Content:

The response does not address the topic properly.

Grammar:

The response lacks any grammatical structure.

Spelling:

No spelling errors in the repeated text.

Vocabulary Range:

The response contains only basic repetition of the prompt.

General Linguistic Range:

The response does not use any language to formulate thoughts.

Development Structure Coherence:

The response lacks coherence and structure.

SCORE 2/15

Respected Sir I am writting this email as a i need more time for sbmitting aproject. My name is [Your Name] . iam am studing in bsc class2. firstly i would like to tell you that for 2 month's have been suffering some medical prblems. so i lost my time. furthermore it is important to note that i want more time.

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Form:

Length is between 30 and 90 words.

Content:

Deals with the topic but omits a major aspect or more than one minor aspect.

Grammar:

Contains mainly simple structures and several basic mistakes.

Spelling:

More than one spelling error.

Vocabulary Range:

Contains mainly basic vocabulary insufficient to deal with the topic at the required level.

General Linguistic Range: