Missed Birthday Apology: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Form:

The email length is more than 120 words.

Content:

The email adequately addresses the topic by apologizing and suggesting an alternative plan.

Grammar:

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect use of 'i' and 'could not able to'.

Spelling:

There is one spelling error: 'declined' should be 'decline'.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary is adequate but not very broad or idiomatic.

General Linguistic Range:

The language range is sufficient but lacks precision in some areas.

Development Structure Coherence:

The email is mostly structured but has some awkward transitions and capitalization errors.

Form:

Word count (102) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks alternative plan suggestion.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'I want wish' and 'an unavoidable circumstances'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, with missing or inappropriate elements.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.

Form:

Word count (106) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task by apologizing and suggesting an alternative plan.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'I forgot you tell' and 'i had a urgent meeting'.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling or typing errors, such as 'collegemates' and 'i'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, with missing or inappropriate elements like capitalization and punctuation.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (95) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed; apology given but alternative plan lacks detail.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'I want to be apologizing'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but ideas lack clarity and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions; awkward phrasing and structure.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variation.

Form:

Word count (95) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks clarity in apology and alternative plan.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as sentence fragments and incorrect phrasing.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions; lacks a clear subject and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (82) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks clarity in reasons for absence.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'to apologizing' and missing articles.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but ideas are not clearly connected.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions; closing lacks proper structure.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (76) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks an alternative plan to meet.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as lack of capitalization and sentence fragments.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions and flow could be clearer.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, e.g., missing capitalization in greeting and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (67) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks suggestion for an alternative plan to meet.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as repeated 'your your'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but ideas could be more clearly connected.

Email Convention:

Correct email format with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (69) is between 50-120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed with apology and alternative plan, but lacks detail.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'I am absence' and 'my daughter parents meeting'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present but relationships between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions with informal tone and missing salutation.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (106) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks clarity and completeness in alternative plan suggestion.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms and missing articles.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling or typing errors, such as 'apology' instead of 'apologize'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions and idea relationships are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent email conventions with informal tone and missing closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.