Late Course Materials Complaint: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 2
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with course details, issues, and request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'I writing' and 'he delay'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions between ideas.
Email Convention:
Correct email format with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the course, issues faced by the delay, and a request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it's has been' and 'I like to share', but readability is not hindered.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'Your Sincerely'.
Organization:
Some organization present; transitions between ideas are not smooth.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent use of email conventions, such as incorrect salutation and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variation.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the course, issues faced, and a request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage, but readability is not significantly hindered.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors detected.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are not smooth.
Email Convention:
Uses email conventions inconsistently, with an informal salutation and incorrect closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Task fully addressed with all themes included: course details, issues faced, and request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'keep up with course' and 'moving head'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'head' instead of 'ahead'.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision in expressing issues and requests.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Task fully addressed with all required themes included.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'in past three weeks' and 'i' instead of 'I'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, such as 'misguiding' instead of 'misleading'.
Organization:
Well-structured with clear presentation of ideas and logical flow.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the course, issues faced, and request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with clear presentation of ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision in expression.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the course, issues faced, and a request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage and sentence structure.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but lacks smooth transitions and clarity in idea relationships.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with a clear structure and appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Several grammatical errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect tense usage.
Spelling:
No noticeable spelling errors, allowing for clear readability.
Organization:
Basic structure present, but transitions are minimal and ideas could be more logically sequenced.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; greeting and closing are present but tone is somewhat informal.
Vocabulary Range:
Vocabulary is limited, with some appropriate words but lacks precision.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task by mentioning course details, issues due to delay, and a request for action.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it got delayed' and 'I have been asking that when will I start my work'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are not smooth.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate greeting and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Word count (95) is between 50-120.
Content:
Task fully addressed with all required themes mentioned.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it is being' instead of 'it has been'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Dear Sir/ Madam, Subject : Urgent request for delivering the pending printed materials. I am writing to express my concern regarding the delay in receiving the printed materials for the online design course I enrolled in. The course description clearly mentioned that all printed resources would be delivered within one week of enrollment. However, it has now been three weeks, and I have yet to receive any materials. This delay is causing significant inconvenience and affecting my ability to keep up with the lessons effectively. I kindly request you to dispatch the materials at the earliest or provide a clear update on the situation. Your prompt action will be appreciated. Thanking you with regards, [Your Name]