Inaccurate Smartwatch Complaint: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of purchase, issues, and request for action.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'Your turely' but does not hinder readability.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but lacks clear transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently, missing appropriate closing and subject line format.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the product, issues, and a request for action.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as missing articles and awkward phrasing, but readability is not hindered.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Well-structured with logical presentation and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email format with appropriate tone and structure.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision in describing issues.

Form:

Word count (107) is between 50–120 inclusive

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of purchase, issues, and request for action

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'its not saving', 'request you to check'

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, e.g., 'smartwach'

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, informal greeting and closing

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary but lacks precision, e.g., 'check and let me know'

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses all required themes but lacks detailed supporting ideas.

Grammar:

Grammar is generally consistent with only occasional errors.

Spelling:

Spelling is accurate with no errors affecting readability.

Organization:

The email has a basic structure but lacks smooth transitions and logical flow.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, affecting the use of conventions.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited, reducing precision and appropriateness.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with all required themes included.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'I would look forward for your response'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently; lacks a proper greeting and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Word count (101) is between 50–120 inclusive.

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of product, issues, and request for action.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors present, such as tense inconsistencies.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently; missing subject line and abrupt closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary but lacks precision in expressing issues.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of purchase, issues, and a request for action.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it stop responding', but readability is maintained.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors observed.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be smoother.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the task with some success, covering product details, issues, and a request for action, but lacks detailed supporting ideas.

Grammar:

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'prior the purchase' instead of 'prior to the purchase', affecting the overall accuracy.

Spelling:

There are no spelling errors, ensuring readability is maintained.

Organization:

The email has a basic structure with an understandable order, but transitions are minimal, affecting the flow.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line and uses a somewhat informal closing, impacting the overall effectiveness of the conventions.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary is appropriate for the context, demonstrating a good command of language.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details, including product and purchase details, issues, and a request for action.

Grammar:

Fair degree of grammatical control with errors such as 'i' instead of 'I' and incorrect verb forms.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors, ensuring readability.

Organization:

Basic structure is present and ideas follow a generally understandable order, but transitions are minimal.

Email Convention:

Email conventions are used inconsistently; missing subject line and somewhat informal tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Limited range of vocabulary; some words are appropriate but lack variety and precision.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details: product details, issues, and request for action.

Grammar:

Fair degree of grammatical control; errors like 'the reading it is showing' and 'fail to record' present.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Basic structure present; ideas generally follow order but transitions are minimal.

Email Convention:

Lacks a subject line, but greeting, closing, and appropriate tone are present.

Vocabulary Range:

Limited vocabulary range; some words are appropriate but lacks precision.