Housewarming Party Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the party, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect capitalization and sentence structure.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be clearer.
Email Convention:
Uses email conventions inconsistently; incorrect salutation and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All themes are addressed: party details, attendees, and items to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'share to this good news' and 'since days'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions and relationships between ideas could be clearer.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All themes are addressed: details, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'make fun and memorable'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logical flow and clear transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email format with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with all required themes included.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect tense and missing articles.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions and clarity in idea presentation.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent email conventions with missing capitalization and informal closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task by including all required themes: party details, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as missing articles and incorrect tense usage, but readability is not hindered.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details about the party, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'dress yourself well with blasting red color'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are abrupt.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses the task but is missing the theme of what to bring to the party.
Grammar:
The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with no noticeable errors.
Spelling:
No spelling or typing errors were detected in the email.
Organization:
The email has a basic structure with a clear introduction, but lacks logical transitions and grouping of ideas.
Email Convention:
The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall structure.
Vocabulary Range:
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied for the context of the invitation.
SCORE 9/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Task partially addressed; details on who else will be there and what to bring are brief.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting and appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 8/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Task partially addressed but lacks details on who else will be there and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect verb forms and punctuation.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions and relationships between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Inconsistent use of email conventions; subject line is not capitalized correctly.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 8/15

AI Feedback
AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
Fully addresses the task by including details of the party, who will be there, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it's been so long time' and 'starts from 06:00PM onwards'.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be clearer.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Subject: Invitation for the housewarming party Dear Anitha, I hope you are doing well. Are you ready to hear a good news? I recently moved into a new apartment and am planning a housewarming party! I would like to invite you for it. Here are the details of the party. Date: 26.06.2026(Friday) Time: 8.00 AM to 11 AM Address: Malibu Apartment, Nallurahalli, Whitefield, Bangalore - 560066. Map Link: https://googlemaps/ewtywssw I have also invited Shubha and Indhu for the party and they have confirmed their presence. After the party, lets stay in my place and have a movie night together. So please carry an extra pair of apparels and board games for more fun. Lets party! See you soon. Yours lovingly, [Your Name]