Housewarming Party Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“You recently moved into a new apartment and are planning a housewarming party. Write an email to your friend inviting them to the event. Your email should include the following three themes: - details of the party - who else will be there - what to bring Include all three themes and provide supporting ideas.”

30 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 9/15

Dear Akash, I hope you are doing great. I am writing this email to invite you to my new apartment for a party. Details are: Address- 110 Arlington blvd, Kitchener Date & Day- Saturday & 14 February 2026. I want to inform you that our friends Pavi, Chhavi, Kamal will be there too. The dress code is “Pyjamas”, I request to bring your most comfortable pyjamas for party. Moreover, We will be having various drinks and food. I hope you will enjoy and make wonderful memories. I will be expecting you on Saturday on time. Please call me out if you have any questions. Your Faithfully [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the party, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect capitalization and sentence structure.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be clearer.

Email Convention:

Uses email conventions inconsistently; incorrect salutation and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Vincent, I am happy to share to this good news that we bought a new apartment near NewYork city last week. I am organising a party at my new residence next Friday at 6 pm. Firstly, I would like to invite you with family to attend the party without fail. Also, all our school friends will be attending the party, it is going to be very memorable moment for us. Moreover, we will have some games, presentations, snacks and many more on that day. Lastly, please bring some home made snacks which I am craving since days. I would love to see you at party soon. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All themes are addressed: party details, attendees, and items to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'share to this good news' and 'since days'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions and relationships between ideas could be clearer.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Hi Sarah, I hope you are doing well. I am excited to tell you that I recently moved into a new apartment, and I am hosting a housewarming party this Sunday morning at 5:00 AM. It will be held at my new place and will catch you there. Several of our close friends, including John and Michael, will also be there, so it will be great chance to catch up with everyone. We will have music, snacks and games to make fun and memorable. You don't need to bring anything special, but if you'd like, you can bring your favorite dessert. With Regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All themes are addressed: details, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'make fun and memorable'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Well-structured with logical flow and clear transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email format with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Hi Sameer, I have recently moved in a new apartment, so I have decided to give all our best friend a housewarming party on this coming sunday. so you have to come with your family also I would like to say that our common best friend also coming. Party details stated below; Date: 5 October sunday Time: 5pm Dress code: Red & black What to bring: hat for your family and kids Hope to see you soon with your family we will have fun. with love [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with all required themes included.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect tense and missing articles.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present but lacks smooth transitions and clarity in idea presentation.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent email conventions with missing capitalization and informal closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

To: [Your Email] From:[Your Email] Subject: Invitation for party Hello dear, as you know I have recently moved to new apartment so I want to throw a housewarming party on 20th of July at 7pm in the evening. I have invited Sukh and Charanjot also. Many of our other friends are also coming. Please bring some fresh flowers with you. I am very excited for the party. Waiting for you to meet soon. Bye [Your Name]
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AI Feedback

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task by including all required themes: party details, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as missing articles and incorrect tense usage, but readability is not hindered.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Hello Tina, I hope you're well. I recently moved into a new apartment near New Jersey at west hills, straight street corner of Hudson building. There is a small party arranged with food and drinks. Our friends from school and college are coming hopefully near 20-25 people. I planned for a themed party dress yourself well with blasting red color. Please be present, looking forward to meeting you. Love, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details about the party, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'dress yourself well with blasting red color'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are abrupt.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Hi John, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to a housewarming party at my home, 131 Westside Road, on 31st May, and Sam and Rita from our college are also coming. It would be a great idea to reconnect after a long time. Moreover, it's a theme-based party, so everyone is coming in costumes. Feel free to reach out if you need additional information. Thanks [Your Name]
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AI Feedback

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the task but is missing the theme of what to bring to the party.

Grammar:

The email demonstrates consistent grammatical control with no noticeable errors.

Spelling:

No spelling or typing errors were detected in the email.

Organization:

The email has a basic structure with a clear introduction, but lacks logical transitions and grouping of ideas.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall structure.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied for the context of the invitation.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Sadiq, Hope you're doing good. How is your family doing? I am writing to invite you for a party, as I have recently moved to a new apartment. The party will be on this weekend at my apartment. I have invited some of our old friends too and I will be glad if you can arrange a small cake. With regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed; details on who else will be there and what to bring are brief.

Grammar:

Mostly accurate grammar with minor errors.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting and appropriate tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 8/15

Subject : invitation of housewarming party Dear friend, I am sujitha , I hope you are very well and happy , here i am very happy . I am writing to this letter for informing one happiest moment in life , that is recently i moved in to a new apartment and are planning a house warming party coming monday morning in between 9.00 to 10.00 am . I decided to invite all my friends and family members and i arranged traditional Indian style dinning . I wish your presence and make more happy . regards [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks details on who else will be there and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as incorrect verb forms and punctuation.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions and relationships between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions; subject line is not capitalized correctly.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 8/15

Hello Mike, I hope you're doing great. It's been so long time we and our graduation friends haven't met after your marriage. So this time I hope we will meet again and bang the party. But this the party is in the new house which I've bought last week in the new apartment located in the downtown. I'm arranging this housewarming party on Sunday, January 16, 2026 starts from 06:00PM onwards. All of our graduated friends will be attending the party and also we have some rituals that should be performed in the part of housewarming party. So I suggest you to please get some traditional wear to attend the rituals. I hope I will meet you soon with your family in my party. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

Fully addresses the task by including details of the party, who will be there, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as 'it's been so long time' and 'starts from 06:00PM onwards'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be clearer.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

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