Housewarming Party Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 2

Your task

Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.

“You recently moved into a new apartment and are planning a housewarming party. Write an email to your friend inviting them to the event. Your email should include the following three themes: - details of the party - who else will be there - what to bring Include all three themes and provide supporting ideas.”

30 community answers with AI feedback

SCORE 10/15

Dear Seema, You would be glad to know that I have recently bought a new house. I am planning a housewarming party this Sunday on 12 April 2026 with my family and friends. So kindly be there at 11:30 a.m. with your family. I would be hosting a potluck party, so please bring along any dessert of your choice for the occasion. All the other college friends have also been invited. I am planning to conduct fun games, followed by a karaoke session and some drinks. Post lunch, I am planning to take you all for fishing in a lake near my house. Looking forward to see you and be part of my celebration. Yours Sincerely,
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.

Spelling:

Three spelling errors: 'Yours Sincerely,' '<ark.'

Organization:

Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear transitions and grouping.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line, but greeting and closing are present with appropriate tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.

SCORE 10/15

Dear Fiona, I hope this email finds you in the best of health and spirits. Firstly I am writing this to invite you to a housewarming party as I have recently moved into a new apartment. Also I have invited other friends as well. This party is a blue coloured theme with traditional wear. Please do bring the ludo games which you have purchased lately, so that we can have some fun activities. I hope to hear from you soon. Please pass on my regards to your family. Love, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with details of the party, attendees, and items to bring.

Grammar:

Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be smoother.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Julie, How are you ? I am very happy to announce that I recently moved into a new apartment near our college and I have planned a housewarming party on next Sunday. Hence, I would like to warmly invite you to the party. To begin with, the party will be arranged in the five star hotel which is located near our school. Since this is a heart-touching moment for me, I have planned to invite all our college friends to the event. Therefore, I want a huge help from you to organize the event. Firstly, please bring the following - stage decoration items, chocolate brownie cake for cutting, and some return gifts. Finally, I am thinking of planning a dance party in the evening. What do you think about? Looking forward to seeing you soon in the event! With Love, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Some grammatical errors present, e.g., 'on next Sunday' should be 'next Sunday'.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Basic structure present but lacks smooth transitions; ideas follow a generally understandable order.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line; other conventions like greeting and closing are present.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.

SCORE 9/15

Hi Rajesh, Hope you are doing well. I recently moved into a new apartment and thought of planning a housewarming party so I am inviting all my friends to this event, including you. The party will be this Saturday at my new apartment ,starting from 5pm. I have invited all my close friends to this party as it feels great to catchup with your old connections in a new place to feel the sense of belongingness, so total of 20 guests might show up. Since, I just moved into my apartment therefore it is not well equipped with basic amenities, specially the kitchen so it would be great if you can get something exciting to eat just like how we do in a potluck party. See you soon, Bye.
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Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Some grammatical errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect punctuation.

Spelling:

No significant spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Basic structure is present, but transitions are minimal and ideas could be more logically sequenced.

Email Convention:

Lacks a subject line and formal sign-off; greeting and closing are present.

Vocabulary Range:

Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Friend, Subject: Housewarming party at my new place! Guess what? I have finally moved into my new apartment and I'm throwing a housewarming party to celebrate! It's happening on Saturday, October 12th starting at 7:00 PM at my new address: B-201, Rajshri Apartment, Ahmedabad. I will be ordering pizza and have some drinks, but feel free to bring your favorite snack or beverage to share. I've invited a few of our mutual friends- Rajat and Sneha along with some of my new neighbors, so it will be fun mix of people. Please let me know if could make it by Wednesday so i can get a headcount. Can't wait to show you my new place. Best, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Fully addresses the task with all required themes included and supported.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'if could make it' and 'i can', but readability is not hindered.

Spelling:

Three spelling or typing errors, including 'i' instead of 'I'.

Organization:

Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation.

SCORE 9/15

Hello Karisha, I hope you are doing well and I just want to tell you that recently I am moved into a new apartment which is near by your house, so I am planning a housewarming party. Firstly, 34 Gunjan flat which is near paldi area and party is on this sunday evening at 7PM. Secondly, I also invite our school friends that krupa, krina, yash, kriya, dhruv and smit. I am excited to meet you all and create more memories together. Lastly, It's theme party so you have to come with some snacks or drinks matching with your clothes color. What you want to bring you can accordingly. I hope you will come. Your lovely friend, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Fair grammatical control but errors present, such as 'I am moved' and missing articles.

Spelling:

Two spelling errors: 'near by' should be 'nearby', 'sunday' should be 'Sunday'.

Organization:

Basic structure with understandable order, but transitions are minimal.

Email Convention:

Greeting and closing are present, but lacks a subject line.

Vocabulary Range:

Limited range with some repetition, reducing precision.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Sham, I hope you are doing great. I am writing to invite you for the inauguration of my new house which is located near the main market of 3B2 in Chandigarh on 2nd June 2026. As I have not even seen you from long, this is the great opportunity where we can have some memories again. As, I have invited all the close common friends and few close relatives, I really want to have your presence with all your family including children. Plus, I want to request to bring the fresh flowers from your garden to use for the religious ceremonies. I hope to see you soon, do not disappoint me by making any excuse. With love, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

All required themes are addressed with sufficient supporting details.

Grammar:

Several grammatical errors present, such as incorrect prepositions and sentence structure.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability.

Organization:

Ideas are clearly introduced, logically ordered, and transitions are used effectively.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line, but greeting and closing are present; tone is somewhat appropriate.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited, with some words appropriate but lacking precision.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Riyan, I want to share a exciting news with you, that I have finally moved to my new apartment. I would like to invite you to my housewarming party, that will be on 25th June at 5pm. All our college friends are coming and it will be retro theme based celebration. So, please dress accordingly and let me know if you need any help with the cloths and accessories. Also, I would appreciate if you will bring your camera for the photographs. I really like all your electronic devices , as they all are well maintained. And please don't bring any gifts. Looking forward to meet you as soon as possible. Regards, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses all required themes with supporting details: party details, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'a exciting news' and 'I really like all your electronic devices , as they all are well maintained.'

Spelling:

There are three spelling or typing errors, such as 'a exciting' and 'cloths'.

Organization:

The email has a clear structure with a logical flow from introduction to closing.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall email convention score.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied for the context.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Zeinab, Hope you are doing well. I would like to invite you for my housewarming party this weekend, as I have moved to a new apartment last week. I would like to celebrate this achievement with you and my family members. I have planned this party on weekend, so that you do not have any excuse to make for not coming. Further, sharing details you should know about the party. 1. Date & Time : 12th March, 2026 at 7 pm 2. Venue : 3rd Floor, Kanishka Tower, Faridabad 3. Theme or Dress code : Ocean You do not need to bring anything for me. I will be waiting for you. See you soon! Lots of Love, [Your Name]
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Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed but 'who else will be there' and 'what to bring' are not fully detailed.

Grammar:

Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.

SCORE 9/15

Dear Arvind, Hope my email finds you in a good mood, as you know last month we have moved into a new apartment, so, we are planning to throw a housewarming party this coming weekend, my new apartment is just beside Reliance Trends at main road. The gathering includes close friends and family, after so many years we all college friends will be meeting each other, it will be really memorable. So, as you are my very special friend so you have to come along with whole family in the party without fail. And, as it is a theme party so don't forget to bring garland of yellow flowers. Yours loving [Your Name]
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Form:

Word count (106) is between 50-120.

Content:

Task fully addressed with details of the party, attendees, and what to bring.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as run-on sentences.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.

Email Convention:

Correct email formatting with a greeting, body, and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.

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