Housewarming Party Invitation: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 2
Your task
Read the situation below, then write an email of 80 to 140 words in response.
30 community answers with AI feedback
30 community answers with AI feedback
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Generally consistent grammatical control with only occasional errors.
Spelling:
Three spelling errors: 'Yours Sincerely,' '<ark.'
Organization:
Ideas follow a logical sequence with clear transitions and grouping.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line, but greeting and closing are present with appropriate tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 10/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with details of the party, attendees, and items to bring.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary used, but lacks precision and variety.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Some grammatical errors present, e.g., 'on next Sunday' should be 'next Sunday'.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected.
Organization:
Basic structure present but lacks smooth transitions; ideas follow a generally understandable order.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line; other conventions like greeting and closing are present.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 9/15

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AI Feedback
Form:
Form score is 1
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Some grammatical errors present, such as missing articles and incorrect punctuation.
Spelling:
No significant spelling errors detected.
Organization:
Basic structure is present, but transitions are minimal and ideas could be more logically sequenced.
Email Convention:
Lacks a subject line and formal sign-off; greeting and closing are present.
Vocabulary Range:
Good command of vocabulary appropriate to the context.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Fully addresses the task with all required themes included and supported.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as 'if could make it' and 'i can', but readability is not hindered.
Spelling:
Three spelling or typing errors, including 'i' instead of 'I'.
Organization:
Well-structured with logically presented ideas and smooth transitions.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with appropriate structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Uses varied and appropriate vocabulary for the situation.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with supporting details.
Grammar:
Fair grammatical control but errors present, such as 'I am moved' and missing articles.
Spelling:
Two spelling errors: 'near by' should be 'nearby', 'sunday' should be 'Sunday'.
Organization:
Basic structure with understandable order, but transitions are minimal.
Email Convention:
Greeting and closing are present, but lacks a subject line.
Vocabulary Range:
Limited range with some repetition, reducing precision.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
All required themes are addressed with sufficient supporting details.
Grammar:
Several grammatical errors present, such as incorrect prepositions and sentence structure.
Spelling:
No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability.
Organization:
Ideas are clearly introduced, logically ordered, and transitions are used effectively.
Email Convention:
Missing subject line, but greeting and closing are present; tone is somewhat appropriate.
Vocabulary Range:
Vocabulary is limited, with some words appropriate but lacking precision.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
The email addresses all required themes with supporting details: party details, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
There are several grammatical errors, such as 'a exciting news' and 'I really like all your electronic devices , as they all are well maintained.'
Spelling:
There are three spelling or typing errors, such as 'a exciting' and 'cloths'.
Organization:
The email has a clear structure with a logical flow from introduction to closing.
Email Convention:
The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall email convention score.
Vocabulary Range:
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied for the context.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Form score is 2
Content:
Task partially addressed but 'who else will be there' and 'what to bring' are not fully detailed.
Grammar:
Mostly accurate grammar with only minor errors.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but relationships between ideas may be unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct and appropriate email formatting, including structure and tone.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.
SCORE 9/15

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Form:
Word count (106) is between 50-120.
Content:
Task fully addressed with details of the party, attendees, and what to bring.
Grammar:
Noticeable grammatical errors, such as run-on sentences.
Spelling:
Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.
Organization:
Some organization present, but transitions between ideas are unclear.
Email Convention:
Correct email formatting with a greeting, body, and closing.
Vocabulary Range:
Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision.
How to approach it
- Match the register. Formal for institutions, semi-formal for colleagues.
- Use email structure. Greeting, purpose, details, polite close.
- Cover every point. Address each bullet the prompt asks for.
- Keep it concise. Clear and complete beats long and rambling.
Model Answer
Subject: Invitation for the housewarming party Dear Anitha, I hope you are doing well. Are you ready to hear a good news? I recently moved into a new apartment and am planning a housewarming party! I would like to invite you for it. Here are the details of the party. Date: 26.06.2026(Friday) Time: 8.00 AM to 11 AM Address: Malibu Apartment, Nallurahalli, Whitefield, Bangalore - 560066. Map Link: https://googlemaps/ewtywssw I have also invited Shubha and Indhu for the party and they have confirmed their presence. After the party, lets stay in my place and have a movie night together. So please carry an extra pair of apparels and board games for more fun. Lets party! See you soon. Yours lovingly, [Your Name]
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