Apartment Power Cuts Complaint: PTE Write Email Question with Sample Answers - Page 3

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the task with some success, including rental details, impact of power issues, and a request for a solution or compensation, but lacks strong supporting details.

Grammar:

There are grammatical errors such as sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms, which affect clarity.

Spelling:

There are no significant spelling errors affecting readability.

Organization:

The email has a basic structure but lacks clear transitions and logical flow, making it somewhat difficult to follow.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall structure, but includes a greeting and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited, with some repetition and lack of precision.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks specific rental details and compensation request.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors such as missing 'am' in 'I am writing'.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling errors, does not affect readability.

Organization:

Some organization present, but lacks clear transitions and conclusion.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, missing closing and name.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed but lacks details on compensation request.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors that affect readability.

Spelling:

Maximum of two spelling or typing errors.

Organization:

Some organization present but lacks clear transitions between ideas.

Email Convention:

Inconsistent use of email conventions, informal tone and missing closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary used but lacks precision and variation.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the task but lacks full development of all themes; rental details are vague and no specific compensation is mentioned.

Grammar:

Several grammatical errors such as incorrect punctuation and sentence structure affect clarity.

Spelling:

Only one spelling error detected, not impacting readability.

Organization:

Basic structure present but lacks smooth transitions; ideas are generally understandable.

Email Convention:

Missing subject line and inconsistent tone; greeting and closing are present but lack formality.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited with some appropriate words, but lacks precision.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the task with some success, including rental details, impact, and a request, but lacks supporting explanations.

Grammar:

Fair degree of grammatical control, but errors like 'started from last 1 week' are present.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected.

Organization:

Basic structure is present, but ideas are listed without smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Email conventions are used inconsistently; no subject line and the tone is somewhat appropriate.

Vocabulary Range:

Limited vocabulary range; some words appropriate but lacks precision.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

Task partially addressed with rental details, impact, and request, but lacks clarity in some parts.

Grammar:

Noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms and sentence structure, affecting readability.

Spelling:

Three or four spelling/typing errors, such as 'loadshading' and 'temprory'.

Organization:

Some organization present, but relationships between ideas are unclear and transitions are lacking.

Email Convention:

Email conventions used inconsistently, with issues in subject line and closing.

Vocabulary Range:

Some appropriate vocabulary, but lacks precision and variety.

Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

The email addresses the task with some success, including rental details, impact of power issues, and a request for a solution, but lacks depth in explaining the impact.

Grammar:

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage and sentence structure, affecting clarity.

Spelling:

There are no significant spelling errors, allowing for clear understanding.

Organization:

The email has a basic structure but lacks smooth transitions and logical flow, making it somewhat difficult to follow.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line and the tone is somewhat informal for a landlord communication.

Vocabulary Range:

The vocabulary is limited and lacks precision, with some awkward or unclear expressions.

Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

All required themes are addressed with supporting details.

Grammar:

Fair degree of grammatical control; errors present but do not hinder understanding.

Spelling:

Three spelling or typing errors detected.

Organization:

Ideas follow a clear, logical sequence with smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Email conventions are followed correctly with appropriate tone.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited but mostly appropriate; lacks precision.

Form:

Form score is 1

Content:

Addresses the task with some success but the request for compensation is weakly developed.

Grammar:

Fair grammatical control; errors like 'for the short of my stay' affect clarity.

Spelling:

No spelling errors detected, ensuring readability.

Organization:

Basic structure present; ideas follow an understandable order but lack smooth transitions.

Email Convention:

Greeting and closing are present but lacks a subject line; tone is somewhat appropriate.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is limited; some words are appropriate but lacks precision.

Form:

Form score is 2

Content:

The email addresses the power issue and requests a solution, but lacks rental details and compensation request.

Grammar:

Errors such as 'recuring' and 'a electrician' are present but do not impede understanding.

Spelling:

Errors include 'recuring' and 'appliance,' totaling three errors.

Organization:

The email follows a basic structure but lacks smooth transitions and a clear introduction of rental details.

Email Convention:

The email lacks a subject line, affecting the overall structure, though greeting and closing are present.

Vocabulary Range:

Vocabulary is appropriate but limited, affecting the precision of the message.