Tenant And House Problems

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I am living in one of your properties on Alex drive beating number Q123.

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I am living in one of your properties on Alex Drive bearing number Q123.

The word 'beating' is incorrect in this context. The correct term is 'bearing' to indicate the number associated with an address.

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one of our roommate is leaving

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one of our roommates is leaving

The subject 'roommate' should be plural to match 'one of our', which implies multiple roommates.

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there are few things which need to be repaired

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there are a few things which need to be repaired

The phrase 'a few' is used to indicate a small number of items, whereas 'few' implies not many, which can have a negative connotation.

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this need to fixed

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this needs to be fixed

The phrase should be 'needs to be fixed' to correctly use the passive voice.

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there is some issue with heating system of house

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there is an issue with the heating system of the house

The article 'an' should be used before 'issue', and 'the' should precede 'heating system' and 'house' for specificity.

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Winter is coming in few days

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Winter is coming in a few days

The phrase 'a few' should be used to indicate a small number of days.

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on utmost priority basis

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on an utmost priority basis

The article 'an' should be used before 'utmost priority basis'.

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one of our roommate is moving

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one of our roommates is moving

The subject 'roommate' should be plural to match 'one of our', which implies multiple roommates.

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Hoping for early and amicable resolution.

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I hope for a prompt and amicable resolution.

The sentence can be improved by using a complete sentence structure for clarity and formality.

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As you were already aware that we were four members sharing the flat.

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As you are already aware, we were four members sharing the flat.

The tense was incorrect; 'are' should be used instead of 'were' to indicate the current state of awareness.

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However one of our flatmate is shifting to another house

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However, one of our flatmates is shifting to another house

A comma is needed after 'However,' and 'flatmate' should be plural to match 'one of our'.

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second, Please fix a generator

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Second, please fix a generator

The word 'second' should be capitalized as it starts a new sentence, and 'please' should not be capitalized.

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as we all are working in hybrid mode, It has become difficult to work from home given the power cuts are more frequent these days.

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as we are all working in a hybrid mode, it has become challenging to work from home due to the frequent power cuts these days.

Rephrased for better flow and clarity.

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I, Puneet Sharma am pursuing

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I, Puneet Sharma, am pursuing

A comma is needed after 'Puneet Sharma' to correctly punctuate the introductory phrase.

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which is close proximity

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which is in close proximity

The correct phrase is 'in close proximity'.

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which needs your kind attention

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which need your kind attention

The subject 'problems' is plural, so the verb should be 'need'.

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The door locks of all the three bedrooms needs to be repaired

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The door locks of all the three bedrooms need to be repaired

The subject 'door locks' is plural, so the verb should be 'need'.

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due to which we are not getting enough hot water for bathing and washing clothes

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which means we are not getting enough hot water for bathing and washing clothes

The phrase 'due to which' is awkward here; 'which means' is more appropriate.

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as it is not in working order, due to which our food items are affected with fungal infection

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as it is not in working order, which means our food items are affected by fungal infection

The phrase 'due to which' is awkward here; 'which means' is more appropriate. Also, 'affected with' should be 'affected by'.

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for regular of our apartment

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for the regular cleaning of our apartment

The phrase 'for regular of our apartment' is incomplete; 'for the regular cleaning of our apartment' is correct.

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We are looking forward for an eager response

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We are looking forward to an eager response

The correct phrase is 'looking forward to'.

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bring to your kind notice

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bring to your attention

The phrase 'bring to your attention' is more concise and commonly used.

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the moving out of one of my flatmates

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one of my flatmates moving out

The phrase 'the moving out of one of my flatmates' is awkward. Rephrasing it to 'one of my flatmates moving out' is more natural.

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since a couple of days

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for a couple of days

The correct preposition to use with 'a couple of days' is 'for' when referring to a duration of time.

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i would request you to fix the same.

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I would request you to fix it.

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized. Additionally, 'fix the same' is awkward; 'fix it' is clearer.

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preventing us from obtaining hot water

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preventing us from getting hot water

The word 'obtaining' can be simplified to 'getting' for more natural expression.

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the three bed room house

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the three-bedroom house

Compound adjectives like 'three-bedroom' should be hyphenated.

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notify that one of the three inmates

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notify you that one of the three tenants

The word 'inmates' is typically used for people living in a prison. 'Tenants' is more appropriate for people renting a house.

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the rent share increases considerably for the both of us

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the rent share increases considerably for both of us

The word 'the' is unnecessary before 'both of us'.

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This is very important to us, me and my other house-mate, because without a third member in the house, the rent share increases considerably for the both of us.

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This is crucial for my housemate and me, as the absence of a third tenant significantly raises our share of the rent.

The sentence can be rephrased for clarity and conciseness.

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I would want to bring to your attention that there is a water seepage issue that persists

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I would like to bring to your attention that there is a persistent water seepage issue

Rephrasing improves clarity and flow.

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one of my tenants is shifting to new house

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one of my roommates is moving to a new house

The term 'tenant' was incorrectly used here. The writer is a tenant, and the person leaving is a roommate. Additionally, 'shifting' should be replaced with 'moving', and 'new house' should have an article 'a' before it.

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I am living here from past one year

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I have been living here for the past year

The present perfect continuous tense 'have been living' is more appropriate here, and 'from past one year' should be 'for the past year'.

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which need to be replaced by the new ones

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which need to be replaced with new ones

The preposition 'by' should be replaced with 'with' to correctly indicate substitution.

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Another area which need repair

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Another area which needs repair

The verb 'need' should be in the third person singular form 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'area'.

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Looking forward for your prompt action.

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Looking forward to your prompt action.

The correct phrase is 'looking forward to'.

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a plethora of issues

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numerous issues

The phrase 'a plethora of' can be simplified to 'numerous' for clarity and conciseness.

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as it will be too costly for us to pay this huge amount

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as it will be too expensive for us to afford the rent

The phrase can be paraphrased for clarity and to avoid repetition of 'costly' and 'huge amount'.

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for past month

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for the past month

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'past month' to specify the time period.

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which make my stay

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which makes my stay

The verb should be in singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'air-conditioning'.

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And also, Please arrange

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Also, please arrange

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Please' should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence.

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I had rented a three-bedroom home with three other students to date.

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I have been renting a three-bedroom house with three other students until now.

Using 'have been renting' clarifies the ongoing nature of the action. 'House' is used instead of 'home' to match the task prompt.

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Now, the rent has to be compensated by the three of us, and we cannot afford to spend more.

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Now, the rent must be covered by the three of us, and we cannot afford to pay more.

Using 'must be covered' is more precise than 'has to be compensated', and 'pay' is more appropriate than 'spend' in this context.

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I am writing you this letter to request you to help us find another tenant for our house.

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I am writing this letter to request your help in finding another tenant for our house.

The phrase 'writing you this letter' is awkward; 'writing this letter' is more appropriate. Also, 'request you to help us' should be 'request your help in finding'.

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the rent of the place is too expensive when divided amongst just the three of us

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the rent is too high for just three of us to afford

The phrase can be more concisely expressed as 'the rent is too high for just three of us to afford'.

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The bathtub has been facing some clogging problems lately.

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The bathtub has been experiencing some clogging problems lately.

The word 'facing' is not typically used with inanimate objects like 'bathtub.' 'Experiencing' is more appropriate in this context.

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some of the tube lights in the house had been experiencing frequent fluctuations.

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some of the tube lights in the house have been experiencing frequent fluctuations.

The present perfect tense 'have been experiencing' is more appropriate here to indicate that the problem is ongoing.

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there are a few things that are in need to be fixed.

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there are a few things that need to be fixed.

The phrase 'in need to be fixed' is awkward. 'Need to be fixed' is a more concise and correct expression.

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Hence, I would like to request a helping hand from your side to find a new renter.

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Therefore, I would appreciate your assistance in finding a new tenant.

The phrase 'a helping hand from your side' can be more formally and clearly expressed as 'your assistance.' 'Renter' can be replaced with 'tenant' for consistency with the term used in the task.

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Dear Sir and Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

The letter should start with 'Dear Sir or Madam' as instructed in the prompt.

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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the room I have been living in with 3 other students.

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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the three-bedroom house I have been living in with three other students.

The task specifies a 'three-bedroom house,' not a 'room.'

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I am a 3rd-year student of Bachelor of Physiotherapy residing in the main girls hostel with 3 other girls till now.

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I am a third-year Bachelor of Physiotherapy student residing in the main girls' hostel with three other girls until now.

Numbers under ten should be written out in words, and 'till' should be replaced with 'until' for formal writing.

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I would like to say that there is no geyser in the bathroom as a result becoming difficult for us to take a bath in winter.

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I would like to mention that the absence of a geyser in the bathroom makes it difficult for us to bathe in winter.

Improved sentence structure and clarity.

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In addition, neighbours are noisy due to which we cannot study properly.

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Additionally, the neighbors are noisy, which makes it difficult for us to study properly.

Improved sentence structure and clarity.