Neighborhood Improvement Suggestions

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I am here to express my gratitutude towards having our opinion on utilising funds.

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I am writing to express my gratitude for considering our opinion on utilizing funds.

The sentence structure is improved for clarity and formality.

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I truely astonished by your approach as this is happening for the first time in a decade.

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I am truly astonished by your approach, as this is happening for the first time in a decade.

The verb 'am' is needed to complete the present continuous tense.

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there is also a need felt for a common laury which every elder could use anytime to access the market or medical store outside the society.

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there is also a felt need for a common laundry that every elder could use at any time to access the market or medical store outside the community.

The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar accuracy.

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I am serving as architecture in a renowned company.

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I am serving as an architect in a renowned company.

The correct noun form 'architect' should be used.

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I can also guide which direction is suitable so that heat could be minimized during summer and low mainteinance required in all weathers.

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I can also guide on which direction is suitable so that heat can be minimized during summer and low maintenance is required in all weather conditions.

The sentence structure and verb forms are corrected for clarity and accuracy.

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Reiterating my appreciation for your decision to keep the discuission open for public.

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I would like to reiterate my appreciation for your decision to keep the discussion open to the public.

The sentence is rephrased for clarity and formality.

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public suggestion which means a lot for local resident.

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public suggestions, which mean a lot to local residents.

Use plural 'suggestions' and 'residents'. Also, correct preposition and add a comma for the non-defining clause.

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Because It did not happen earlier.

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as it did not happen earlier.

Avoid starting a sentence with 'because' and use lowercase 'it'.

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require your prompt attention.

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requires your prompt attention.

Subject-verb agreement: 'information' is singular.

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we do not have garden

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we do not have a garden

Use the article 'a' before singular countable nouns.

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dwellers has demanded

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dwellers have demanded

Subject-verb agreement: 'dwellers' is plural.

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you can be utilised your funds

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you can utilise your funds

Correct usage is 'utilise' instead of 'be utilised'.

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addition workers

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additional workers

Use 'additional' for the adjective form.

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I would like to provide some valueable information which require your prompt attention.

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I wish to share some valuable suggestions that need your immediate attention.

Improves clarity and formality.

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I assure you, I can do whatever assistance you will require such as, arranage local members meeting, addition workers and many more.

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I assure you that I can provide any assistance you may require, such as arranging meetings with local members, recruiting additional workers, and more.

Clarifies the offer of assistance and improves sentence structure.

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facilitate them invest better

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facilitate their better investment

The phrase 'facilitate them invest better' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'facilitate their better investment' to correctly use the possessive form and noun.

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invest primarily for the development

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invest primarily in the development

The preposition 'for' should be replaced with 'in' to correctly indicate the focus of the investment.

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in construction of schools

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in the construction of schools

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'construction' to specify which construction is being referred to.

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appreciate the soul of the local council

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commend the local council's commitment

The phrase 'appreciate the soul of the local council' is awkward and can be improved by using 'commend the local council's commitment'.

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help in enhancement of the governance

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contribute to the improvement of governance

The phrase 'help in enhancement of the governance' is wordy and can be improved by using 'contribute to the improvement of governance'.

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public's opinion about investment of funds in our neighbourhood.

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the public's opinion about the investment of funds in our neighbourhood.

Definite article 'the' is needed before 'public's opinion' and 'investment' to specify the nouns.

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Being a resident in this locality I would like to provide some suggestions for utilization of money for development of our surrounding.

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Being a resident in this locality, I would like to provide some suggestions for the utilization of money for the development of our surroundings.

Comma needed after 'locality' for clarity, and definite articles 'the' are needed before 'utilization' and 'development'. 'Surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings'.

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on daily basis

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on a daily basis

The correct phrase is 'on a daily basis'.

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Lastly, local library requires a almirah for new section of books, it could be arranged by us.

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Lastly, the local library requires an almirah for a new section of books, which could be arranged by us.

Definite article 'the' is needed before 'local library', 'an' should be used before a vowel sound in 'almirah', and 'a' is needed before 'new section'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'which'.

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I hope you would consider my diligent suggestions and discuss with council members.

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I hope you will consider my diligent suggestions and discuss them with the council members.

Use 'will' for future intentions. 'Them' is needed to refer back to 'suggestions', and definite article 'the' is needed before 'council members'.

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I,am writing in context to the advertisement in newspaper by the local council asking suggestions from the locals regarding how to invesworks t the funds in the neighborrhood area.

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I am writing in response to the advertisement in the newspaper by the local council asking for suggestions from the locals regarding how to invest the funds in the neighborhood area.

The sentence has several grammatical errors including incorrect punctuation and word usage. 'I,am' should be 'I am', and 'in context to' should be 'in response to'. 'Invesworks t' seems to be a typographical error and should be 'invest'.

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I suggest that,that money allocated ,should be spent on the maintanence and repair of roads.

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I suggest that the money allocated should be spent on the maintenance and repair of roads.

The sentence contains redundant commas and a repeated word. 'that,that' should be 'that the', and unnecessary commas should be removed.

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I, look forward to hear from you.

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I look forward to hearing from you.

The phrase 'look forward to hear' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'look forward to hearing'.

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I am grateful and thankful to you,for asking the public on their views and ideas.

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I appreciate your decision to seek the public's views and ideas.

The sentence could be paraphrased for clarity and conciseness. 'I am grateful and thankful to you,for' can be simplified to 'I appreciate your decision to'.