Faulty Appliance Complaint

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Dear sir,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

The salutation should match the one given in the prompt.

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on date 20th of march

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on the 20th of March

The correct format for dates is 'on the [day] of [Month]'.

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in details about the issue

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in detail about the issue

The phrase 'in detail' is used to mean thoroughly or comprehensively.

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asper temperature

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as per the temperature

'As per' is used to mean 'in accordance with'.

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Hope you take an effort

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I hope you will make an effort

The sentence needs a subject and proper verb form.

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I am writing this letter in regard to the home appliance that I purchased from your store.

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I am writing to express my concern about a home appliance I recently purchased from your store.

This version is more concise and directly states the purpose of the letter.

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Please send your professional to look through the matter and take considerable measures to rectify the error.

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Please send a technician to inspect the appliance and take appropriate measures to resolve the issue.

This version is clearer and more specific about the action needed.

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I purchase recently in your store.

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I purchased recently in your store.

The verb should be in the past tense to match the context of the sentence.

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Lask week, I purchased an IPhone 16 which is having heating issues.

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Last week, I purchased an iPhone 16, which is having heating issues.

Corrected the spelling of 'Last' and 'iPhone'. Added a comma before 'which' for clarity.

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couldn't use it because of this complaint.

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couldn't use it because of this issue.

Replaced 'complaint' with 'issue' to accurately describe the problem with the phone.

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get access of my official documents

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get access to my official documents

The correct preposition to use with 'access' is 'to'.

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it gets easily detached from the adapter.

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it easily detaches from the adapter.

Rephrased to maintain parallel structure and clarity.

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i expect you to provide refund

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I expect you to provide a refund

Capitalized 'I' and added 'a' before 'refund' for correct grammar.

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I have not suffered from these complains till now.

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I have not experienced these complaints until now.

Replaced 'suffered from' with 'experienced' and corrected 'complains' to 'complaints'.

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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards the mobile phone

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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the mobile phone

The correct preposition to use with 'dissatisfaction' is 'with'.

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I mainly got this for my office purpose

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I primarily purchased this for work purposes

Rephrased for clarity and conciseness.

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Furthermore, i expect you to provide refund or get my mobile exchanged at the earliest possible.

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Furthermore, I would like a refund or an exchange for my mobile at your earliest convenience.

Rephrased for politeness and clarity.

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I expect you to check the batch of products that came along with the defective ones.

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I suggest you inspect the batch of products that included the defective ones.

Rephrased to sound more polite and formal.

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Iam writing

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I am writing

There should be a space between 'I' and 'am'.

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i had bought

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I had bought

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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Its a mode 5

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It's a model 5

'Its' is possessive, while 'It's' is a contraction for 'it is'. Also, 'mode' should be 'model'.

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13 th march2025

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13th March 2025

The correct format is '13th March 2025' with 'th' and 'March' capitalized and a space between 'March' and '2025'.

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about the dissatisfaction with the poroduct

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the dissatisfaction with the product

The phrase 'about the dissatisfaction with the product' is redundant; 'the dissatisfaction with the product' is sufficient.

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i noticed

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I noticed

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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the results are same

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the results are the same

The article 'the' is needed before 'same'.

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recieving

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receiving

The word 'receiving' is misspelled as 'recieving'.

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Your's faithfully

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Yours faithfully

'Yours' is the correct possessive form, without an apostrophe.

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I want you to kindly look into this matter and take a decision accordingly.

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I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter and decide on the appropriate action.

The revised sentence is more polite and formal.

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Iperfer the latter option.

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I prefer the latter option.

The word 'prefer' is misspelled as 'Iperfer'.

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there is some issue with the regulator and blades.

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there are some issues with the regulator and blades.

The plural form 'issues' should be used since it refers to more than one problem.

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the blades are not moving and is stuck

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the blades are not moving and are stuck

The subject 'blades' is plural, so the verb 'are' should be used instead of 'is'.

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to take a look on this

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to take a look at this

The correct preposition to use here is 'at' rather than 'on'.

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I kindly request you to send one of your members to take a look on this and repair the product.

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I kindly request that you send a staff member to inspect and repair the product.

The sentence can be improved for clarity and formality by using 'staff member' and 'inspect'.

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as it was working fine for last couple of days.

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as it had been working fine for the last couple of days.

The past perfect tense 'had been working' is used to show that the action was completed in the past before another past action.

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the washing did not initiated

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the washing did not initiate

The base form of the verb 'initiate' should be used after 'did not'.

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exmaine

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examine

The correct spelling is 'examine', meaning to inspect or look at closely.

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bring it to your attention

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inform you

Using 'inform you' is more concise and formal.

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help us with replacing it with the working one

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assist us in replacing it with a functional one

Using 'assist us in replacing it with a functional one' is more formal and precise.