Describe an item of clothing that someone gave you.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

Incorrect use of plural form 'jewelries'.

Use 'jewelry' instead, as it is an uncountable noun.

Repetition of the phrase 'beautiful elegant hairpins'.

Consider varying the vocabulary, such as 'exquisite' or 'charming' to avoid repetition.

Incorrect use of 'it' when referring to 'hairpins'.

Use 'them' instead of 'it' to match the plural noun 'hairpins'.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and'.

Use more varied connectors, such as 'moreover', 'in addition', or 'furthermore' to enhance coherence.

The response uses informal language such as 'okay' and 'yeah,' which is not suitable for a formal test like IELTS.

Start with a more formal introduction, such as 'The item of clothing I received as a gift was...' and avoid using informal fillers.

There is a repetition of words and phrases, such as 'I remember' and 'beautiful.'

Use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'beautiful,' use 'stunning' or 'gorgeous.'

The response lacks cohesive devices, which affects the flow of the narrative.

Incorporate connectors like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' and 'In addition' to improve the coherence of the response.

The response includes subject-verb agreement errors, such as 'I remember I telling them.'

Correct it to 'I remember telling them.' Ensure subject and verb agree in number and tense.

There is a lack of structured storytelling technique.

Consider structuring the story from past to present and then speculate about the future. For example, discuss how you felt when you received the gift, how you wore it, and how you might wear it in the future.

The sentence structure is quite long and lacks proper punctuation, which affects clarity.

Break down long sentences into shorter ones using punctuation marks like periods and commas for better clarity and flow.

Incorrect use of 'aesthetic look' and repetition of 'look.'

Use 'aesthetic appeal' or 'aesthetic design' to avoid repetition and convey the meaning more accurately.

Subject-verb agreement error in 'he have bought'.

Use 'he has bought' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement.

Incorrect use of 'an a yellowish border'.

Use 'a yellowish border' as 'yellowish' starts with a consonant sound.

Repeated use of 'small small designs'.

Use 'small designs' or 'intricate designs' for better expression.

Incorrect tense usage in 'it is matched to my lehenga'.

Use 'it matched my lehenga' for correct tense usage.

Overuse of 'and' and 'because'.

Use connectors like 'moreover,' 'furthermore,' or 'as a result' to improve sentence variety and flow.

Overuse of simple connectors such as 'so' and 'but.'

Try using a variety of cohesive devices like 'therefore,' 'however,' or 'nevertheless' to improve the flow of your response.

Repetition of words such as 'very' and 'favorite.'

Use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition, for example, instead of 'very very pretty,' use 'extremely attractive.'

Incorrect use of 'eyeing on it.'

The correct phrase is 'eyeing it' or 'keeping an eye on it.'

Informal language such as 'bang on' could be replaced with more formal expressions.

Consider using 'perfect' or 'ideal' instead of 'bang on' to maintain a more formal tone.

Lack of structured storytelling.

Structure your response by starting with the past (when you received it), moving to the present (how you feel about it now), and speculating about the future (how you plan to use it).

The response lacks clear structure and coherence, making it difficult to follow. It jumps between ideas without clear transitions.

Organize the response using a structured approach: start by describing the item, mention who gave it to you, explain why it is special, and end with how it makes you feel. Use cohesive devices like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' and 'In addition' to guide the listener through the narrative.

Repetitive use of the word 'because' and 'clothes' without variation.

Use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeatedly saying 'clothes,' use 'attire' or 'outfits.'

Incorrect use of expressions such as 'it feels me so elegant' and 'it feels me so comfortable.'

Correct these expressions to 'it makes me feel elegant' and 'it makes me feel comfortable.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'so.'

Incorporate more varied connectors such as 'therefore,' 'furthermore,' and 'as a result' to enhance the flow of ideas.

Lack of detailed description about the dress and its significance.

Include more descriptive vocabulary to paint a vivid picture of the dress and explain its significance. Mention specific features like fabric, style, or any sentimental value.

The sentence structure is somewhat confusing, especially with the phrase 'So the jacket it is that was made out of wool.'

Rephrase to improve clarity, such as 'The jacket is made of wool and is very comfortable.'

The sentence 'can be worn during the summer seasons as well' lacks clarity.

Specify why it can be worn in summer, perhaps due to its lightweight nature.

Repetitive use of 'gave it to me' and 'token of affection.'

Use synonyms or rephrase to avoid repetition, such as 'presented it as a gesture of love.'

The phrase 'it had a pullover for a head' is unclear.

Clarify by saying 'it had a hood' if that's what is meant.

The response includes a mix of Hindi and English, which can affect coherence and clarity.

Try to maintain consistency by using only English throughout your response to ensure clarity.

The phrase 'one of my friends gifted me a pair of clothes' is awkward.

Consider saying 'a friend gifted me a set of clothes' for better clarity.

Repetition of 'looking like Hrithik Roshan in my mind' affects fluency.

Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. You could say, 'I felt like Hrithik Roshan.'

The use of 'one my all friends' is incorrect.

It should be 'one of my oldest friends' or 'one of my best friends'.

The sentence 'I thanked him after opening the gift' could be more descriptive.

Enhance the narrative by saying, 'I expressed my gratitude as soon as I unwrapped the gift.'

The phrase 'it was looking very good on me' is grammatically incorrect.

Use 'it looked very good on me' for correct tense usage.

The response lacks a clear structure and is difficult to follow due to the absence of cohesive devices and a clear timeline.

Start by introducing the item and its significance, then describe the circumstances under which it was given, and conclude with your feelings about it. Use cohesive devices like 'First of all,' 'Then,' and 'Finally' to guide the listener through your story.

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage and subject-verb agreement.

Ensure consistent use of past tense when talking about past events, and check subject-verb agreement. For example, 'I have studied in UG' should be 'I studied in UG,' and 'this dupatta they wear' should be 'this dupatta they wore.'

Repetitive use of words and phrases, such as 'dupatta' and 'traditionally.'

Try using synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeatedly saying 'dupatta,' you could use 'scarf' or 'traditional garment.'

The response contains incomplete sentences and lacks punctuation, making it hard to understand.

Break down long sentences into shorter, complete sentences with appropriate punctuation to improve clarity and coherence.