Describe a singer that you like.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

The phrase 'who stole all the hearts for the worldwide' is awkwardly phrased.

Consider rephrasing it to 'who has captured the hearts of people worldwide.'

The phrase 'south side' is vague.

Specify the region, such as 'southern India,' for clarity.

Repetition of phrases like 'very, very much' and 'different, different tunes.'

Use 'extremely' or 'variety of tunes' instead to avoid repetition.

Incorrect use of 'He used to deserve Oscars.'

Use 'He deserves Oscars' or 'He has won Oscars' depending on the intended meaning.

The phrase 'from the nationwide' is incorrect.

Use 'nationally' or 'from across the nation.'

The sentence 'His character also a very good character.' lacks a verb.

Use 'His character is also very admirable.'

Starting a sentence with 'Yeah' is informal.

Avoid starting sentences with 'Yeah' in formal settings.

Incorrect use of the indefinite article 'a' with 'artist Orjit Singh'.

Use 'an' before 'artist' since it begins with a vowel sound.

Subject-verb agreement issue in 'songs which was uploaded'.

Use 'were' instead of 'was' to agree with the plural noun 'songs'.

Incorrect use of 'platform' in singular form.

Use 'platforms' to indicate multiple platforms like YouTube and Spotify.

Incoherent sentence structure in 'Whenever a person listens to his song, I think he would laugh at himself and his voice too much.'

Clarify the intended meaning. Perhaps rephrase to something like, 'Whenever people listen to his songs, they find themselves emotionally moved by his raw and emotional voice.'

Incorrect use of 'concert prize' instead of 'concert price'.

Use 'price' to refer to the cost of attending a concert.

Incorrect phrase 'He sends every ticket'.

Rephrase to 'He sells out every ticket' to indicate that all tickets are sold.

Repetition of 'misuses' in 'he never misuses his money for here and there'.

Consider using 'wastes' or 'squanders' instead for variety.

Overuse of 'basically' and 'actually'.

Limit the use of these fillers to maintain a more formal tone.

Mispronunciation suggestion: 'Orjit Singh'.

The correct name might be 'Arijit Singh'.

Repetition of phrases such as 'whenever I get upset' and 'the way he sings.'

Try to use varied expressions to avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'whenever I get upset,' you could say 'when I'm feeling down.'

Grammatical error in 'he worked in the music industry from last century to last years.'

Correct the tense and phrasing to 'he has been working in the music industry since the last century.'

Overuse of simple connectors such as 'and' and 'also.'

Incorporate more complex connectors like 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'as a result' to enhance coherence.

Lack of specific examples or anecdotes about the singer's influence or achievements.

Include specific songs, albums, or achievements of Mushaf Qadri Ali Khan to make the response more engaging and informative.

Inconsistent use of articles, such as 'some guzzles also.'

Ensure correct article usage, for instance, 'some ghazals as well.'

There is a lack of cohesive devices and connectors to improve the flow of ideas.

Use connectors like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' 'Additionally,' and 'In conclusion' to structure your response more clearly.

The phrase 'a singer can control the emotions of people and making the people so happier' contains a grammatical error.

Use 'make people happier' instead of 'making the people so happier' for correct subject-verb agreement.

Repetitive use of the word 'singer' and 'beautiful.'

Try using synonyms like 'vocalist,' 'artist,' or 'mesmerizing' to add variety to your vocabulary.

The sentence 'I am one of the happiest girl in the world' contains a grammatical error.

Use 'one of the happiest girls in the world' to correct the singular/plural mistake.

Inconsistent tense usage, especially with the phrase 'she sang.'

Maintain consistent tense by using 'she sings' instead of 'she sang' to match the present context.

The sentence 'And I really like him because he is somebody who captivates the mind of the listeners with his melodious voice.' starts with 'And.'

Instead of starting with 'And,' you could use 'Furthermore' or 'Additionally' to improve the flow.

The phrase 'his voice has never been changing' is awkward.

You could say 'his voice has remained consistent over the years' to express this idea more clearly.

The sentence 'And he doesn't sing only in the Bollywood industry.' is not well-structured.

You could rephrase it to 'He not only sings in the Bollywood industry but also in some South Indian industries.'

The use of 'so many awards' and 'a lot of young aspirants' lacks variety.

Try using synonyms like 'numerous awards' and 'many young hopefuls' to add variety to your vocabulary.

The use of 'ji' after Lata Mangeshkar may not be familiar to all audiences in the context of an international exam.

Consider using 'Lata Mangeshkar' without 'ji' or explain that 'ji' is an honorific used in India.

Subject-verb agreement error in 'one of the greatest singer'.

It should be 'one of the greatest singers'.

Incorrect use of 'as a mother' in the context of her singing career.

Rephrase to focus on her career achievements, e.g., 'She was one of the first female singers in India to achieve such success.'

Repetitive use of 'maybe' in describing song types.

Use varied expressions like 'whether it be a prayer, a romantic song, or a devotional song'.

Incorrect use of 'which' in 'individual which I look at'.

Use 'whom' instead of 'which'.