Describe a prize you have won.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

The response contains several repetitive phrases and lacks coherence.

Try to structure your response more clearly by organizing your thoughts into distinct sections. For example, start by describing the prize, then explain the competition, and conclude with how it made you feel.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'because'.

Use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'therefore', 'however', and 'moreover' to improve the flow of your response.

Incorrect tense usage with phrases like 'I used to feel'.

Use the present tense when describing ongoing feelings, such as 'I feel very happy whenever I see it'.

Repetition of the phrase 'I kept a lot of effort'.

Use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For instance, 'I put in a significant amount of effort' or 'I was highly dedicated'.

The sentence structure is quite complex and can lead to confusion.

Break down long sentences into shorter, clearer ones to enhance understanding.

There is a subject-verb agreement issue in the sentence 'There have been 50 students who has been attended to that conference.'

The correct form should be 'There were 50 students who attended that conference.'

Incorrect tense usage in 'I didn't even thought that I will get third prize.'

The correct form should be 'I didn't even think that I would get the third prize.'

Repetitive use of the word 'prize.'

Consider using synonyms like 'award' or 'trophy' to add variety.

Overuse of 'because' in the sentence 'I was really happy because I didn't expect it because I knew how I wrote the exam.'

Use alternative connectors like 'as' or 'since' to improve flow.

Missing article in 'written exam for around one hour.'

Include 'a' to make it 'a written exam for around one hour.'

The phrase 'The best award till date I won' is awkwardly structured.

Rephrase to 'The best award I have won to date.'

The sentence 'Usually we were told to write one essay about any topic we can choose and we have to submit it to teacher.' lacks clarity and proper tense agreement.

Rephrase to 'We were usually asked to write an essay on a topic of our choice and submit it to the teacher.'

Repetition of 'teacher' in 'and I submitted that to my teacher.'

Use a pronoun to avoid repetition: 'and I submitted it to her/him.'

The phrase 'I felt very amazed' is not idiomatic.

Use 'I was amazed' or 'I felt amazed.'

The phrase 'even my classmates also' is redundant.

Use either 'even my classmates' or 'my classmates also.'

The sentence 'When I went home I told about this award to my parents' is awkwardly structured.

Rephrase to 'When I went home, I told my parents about the award.'

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'One of the unexpected prize' should be 'One of the unexpected prizes,' and 'an photography competition' should be 'a photography competition.'

Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. For example, use 'a' before words that start with a consonant sound and 'an' before words that start with a vowel sound.

The sentence 'I see their ad through the Instagram and I just get information like we can use digital camera, only mobile camera are allowed' is inconsistent in tense.

Maintain consistency in verb tense. Use past tense for events that have already happened, such as 'I saw their ad on Instagram and got information that only mobile cameras were allowed.'

The narrative lacks cohesive devices and connectors, making the flow of ideas less smooth.

Use connectors like 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' 'However,' and 'Finally' to improve the flow of the narrative. For instance, 'Firstly, I noticed the advertisement on Instagram. Moreover, I learned that only mobile cameras were permitted.'

There is repetition of words like 'just' and 'take.'

Try to use synonyms or rephrase sentences to avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'I just took my phone and take a photograph,' you could say, 'I quickly grabbed my phone and captured a photograph.'

The sentence 'It was so unexpected for me because I am not a good in photography and I did not take any wildlife photography and all' is awkwardly phrased.

Rephrase for clarity: 'It was unexpected for me because I am not skilled in photography and had never tried wildlife photography before.'

The phrase 'It was happened' is incorrect.

Use 'It happened' instead.

The sentence 'there was a inter competitions competition sports activity was held on by the principal our' is awkward and repetitive.

Rephrase to 'there was an inter-school sports competition organized by our principal.'

Repetition of 'I got' and 'when' in the sentence.

Avoid repetition by rephrasing to 'I was informed about the schedule of the competition.'

Incorrect use of 'on in a sport activity'.

Use 'in a sports activity' instead.

Sentence 'I can't speak you' is incomplete and unclear.

Clarify the sentence or remove it if unnecessary.