Unpaid Work At School

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Although a full-time data scientist, I consider myself a life-long learner and would be keen to share my knowledge and experience in the academics.

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Although I am a full-time data scientist, I consider myself a lifelong learner and would be keen to share my knowledge and experience in academics.

The sentence requires the subject 'I' after 'Although' for clarity. 'Lifelong' is one word, and 'in academics' is more appropriate than 'in the academics'.

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Through your website, I learnt that management at your school is actively inviting applications with proficiency in technical skills.

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Through your website, I learned that the management at your school is actively inviting applications from individuals with proficiency in technical skills.

The article 'the' is needed before 'management' for specificity, and 'from individuals' clarifies who should have the proficiency.

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Moreover, in my job I seldom get enough opportunity to communicate and interact.

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Moreover, in my job, I seldom get enough opportunities to communicate and interact.

A comma is needed after 'job' for proper sentence structure, and 'opportunities' should be plural as it refers to multiple chances.

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My professional portfolio, displays all the project details I had undertaken during my leisure time.

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My professional portfolio displays all the project details I have undertaken during my leisure time.

There should be no comma after 'portfolio', and 'have undertaken' is the correct tense for ongoing relevance.

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The portal will also have link to my youtube channel, that have recorded contents especially curated for school-going children.

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The portal will also have a link to my YouTube channel, which has recorded content especially curated for school-going children.

'YouTube' should be capitalized, 'a link' requires an article, 'which' is the correct relative pronoun, and 'content' is uncountable, so 'has' is used.

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Looking forward to collaborate with you.

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I look forward to collaborating with you.

The sentence requires a subject and proper verb form: 'I look forward to collaborating'.

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as i have been a student

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as I have been a student

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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if i could apply

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if I could apply

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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Yours Faithfully

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Yours faithfully

In formal letters, 'faithfully' should not be capitalized.

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I would find it more than a pleasure to offer my services at your disposal for the betterment of this school and its students.

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I would be delighted to offer my services to contribute to the improvement of the school and its students.

This paraphrasing provides a clearer and more concise expression of the writer's willingness to help.

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I am currently working as a accountant in the company called Ernst and Young, as I am having a tight schedule on weekdays, so I am available to do this voluntary work on saturdays and sundays.

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I am currently working as an accountant at a company called Ernst and Young. As I have a tight schedule on weekdays, I am available to do this voluntary work on Saturdays and Sundays.

Use 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound. The sentence was also a run-on sentence and needed to be split for clarity.

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I always wanted to do such volunteer work since childhood, I have always achieved higher grades in mathematics since my school days.

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I have always wanted to do such volunteer work since childhood, and I have consistently achieved high grades in mathematics since my school days.

Use present perfect tense for actions that started in the past and continue to the present. Also, 'higher grades' should be 'high grades' for clarity.

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I am willing to do such work in order to share my knowledge of mathematics to the pupils of your school.

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I am willing to do such work in order to share my knowledge of mathematics with the pupils of your school.

Use 'with' instead of 'to' when referring to sharing knowledge.

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understand the equations well by heart.Additionally,

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understand the equations well by heart. Additionally,

There should be a space after a period.

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I came across an article yesterday, in the times of India newspaper, in which you had mentioned the requirement of a person who is willing to do unpaid voluntary work at your school.

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I read an article yesterday in The Times of India where you mentioned the need for someone to do unpaid voluntary work at your school.

Simplifying the sentence structure can make it clearer and more concise. Also, newspaper names should be capitalized.

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apply in response to an advertisment

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apply for the advertised position

Use 'apply for' when referring to a position or job.

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i would be resourceful there

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I would be resourceful there

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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I will be free post the class everyday

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I will be free after class every day

Use 'after' instead of 'post' and 'every day' as two words.

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Growing up, I've enjoyed participating in community work and it has greatly shaped who I am.

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Throughout my upbringing, participating in community work has been a passion of mine, significantly shaping my character.

This rephrasing provides a more formal tone and clearer expression.

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Some of the best lessons I've learned are from the different volunteer groups I've joined over the years and this would be a great oppotunity for me to blend into the new school.

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The various volunteer groups I have joined over the years have imparted invaluable lessons, and this opportunity would allow me to integrate seamlessly into the new school environment.

This rephrasing enhances clarity and coherence.

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This is one the major reason why I am interested in this work.

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This is one of the major reasons why I am interested in this work.

The phrase should be 'one of the major reasons' as it refers to one among many reasons.

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I am working as an English trainer in private institute, and I have 5 years experience in teaching.

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I am working as an English trainer in a private institute, and I have 5 years of experience in teaching.

The article 'a' is needed before 'private institute', and 'years of experience' is the correct phrase.

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This skill will prove fruitful for students of your school.

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This skill will be beneficial for the students at your school.

The word 'beneficial' is more formal and appropriate in this context.

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As I am a workaholic person, I am able to devote time for students in evening only, from 5 pm to 8 pm, since I am busy in morning time.

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As I am a dedicated person, I am able to devote time to students in the evening only, from 5 pm to 8 pm, since I am busy in the morning.

The term 'dedicated' is more positive and professional than 'workaholic', and 'to devote time to students' is the correct phrase. Additionally, 'in the morning' is more concise.

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when I was growing up I had helped in the old age home

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When I was growing up, I helped at the old age home

The sentence should start with a capital letter and use simple past tense for consistency.

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in area of art and craft

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in the area of art and craft

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'area'.

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I am only available in the weekends

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I am only available on the weekends

The preposition 'on' is used with 'weekends'.

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Pupils are backbone of any country

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Students are the backbone of any nation

Using 'students' and 'nation' enhances clarity and formality.

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This letter is written by me in response to the advertisement released by your prestigious school for hiring unpaid workers.

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I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement released by your prestigious school for hiring unpaid workers.

The original sentence is passive and less direct. Using the active voice makes the sentence clearer and more engaging.

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I believe I would be a perfect fit for this job.

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I believe I am well-suited for this role.

The phrase 'well-suited for this role' is a more formal and precise way to express suitability for a position.

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Looking forward to hearing back from you.

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I look forward to hearing from you.

The revised sentence is more formal and grammatically complete, suitable for a letter.

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Yours Faithfully

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Yours faithfully

In English, only the first word of a complimentary closing should be capitalized.

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I always wanted to give back to the society, and what better way than empowering the next generation.

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I have always wanted to give back to society, and I believe there is no better way than by empowering the next generation.

The sentence can be improved for clarity and grammatical correctness by adding 'have' to indicate a continuous desire and by making the comparison clearer.

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working as Project Manager in a IT company

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working as a Project Manager in an IT company

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound, and 'a' should precede 'Project Manager'.

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Please let me know on when can I resume this activity

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Please let me know when I can resume this activity

The word 'on' is unnecessary, and the sentence structure should be corrected for clarity.

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I feel relaxed and sress free when I am involved in this type of social services.

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I feel relaxed and stress-free when I engage in this type of social service.

Improved sentence structure and corrected spelling for clarity and fluency.

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Mainly I love to work without pay in school since this gives me a sense of satisfaction

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Primarily, I enjoy working without pay at a school because it gives me a sense of satisfaction.

Improved sentence structure for coherence and clarity.

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advertisement that is published in local newspaper about unpaid worker required by your school

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advertisement that was published in the local newspaper about an unpaid worker required by your school

The verb tense should be past to match the context, and articles 'the' and 'an' are needed before 'local newspaper' and 'unpaid worker', respectively.

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in similar kind work of work

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in a similar kind of work

The phrase is incorrectly structured; it should be 'in a similar kind of work'.

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from coming Monday

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from the coming Monday

The article 'the' is needed before 'coming Monday'.

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I am a college student and have a lot of free time after my classes are over.

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As a college student, I have a considerable amount of free time after my classes.

The sentence can be paraphrased for conciseness and clarity.