Migrants And Refugee Movement

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The unit of measurements is in numbers

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The unit of measurement is in numbers

The singular form 'measurement' should be used here.

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significant fluctuations in the number of migrants and refugees was observed

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significant fluctuations in the number of migrants and refugees were observed

The subject 'fluctuations' is plural, so 'were' should be used.

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Contrastingly, Italy and Spain remained steady at this time.

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In contrast, Italy and Spain remained steady at this time.

'In contrast' is more appropriate for making comparisons.

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figures in Spain have remained low

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the numbers in Spain have remained consistently low

Adding 'consistently' provides clarity and emphasis.

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a little above 100000

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slightly above 100,000

Using 'slightly' and adding a comma improves readability and precision.

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between the year 2014 to 2017

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between the years 2014 and 2017

Use 'between' with 'and' for a range of years.

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every single of these countries

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each of these countries

The correct phrase is 'each of these countries'.

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it become almost equal

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it became almost equal

The past tense of 'become' is 'became'.

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Overall, every year slightly less then 200000 people from every single of these countries move to Europe.

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Overall, slightly fewer than 200,000 people from each of these countries move to Europe each year.

Improved clarity and precision in language.

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refugees from Greece was highest

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refugees from Greece were highest

Subject-verb agreement error.

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immagrants and fugitives from Italy was

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immigrants and fugitives from Italy were

Subject-verb agreement error.

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Spain's migrants was

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Spain's migrants were

Subject-verb agreement error.

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Spain and Greece residents relocated to Europe were

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Spain and Greece residents who relocated to Europe were

Missing relative pronoun.

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relatively constant throughout the period

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remained stable over the period

Simplified expression for clarity.

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illustrated a decline

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showed a decline

Use of more straightforward language.

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The bar graph illustrates the information about the people who are moving to Europe countries like Italy, Greece and Spain by nationality and region in the year from 2014 to 2017.

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The bar graph illustrates information about people moving to European countries like Italy, Greece, and Spain by nationality and region from 2014 to 2017.

Removed 'the' before 'information' and corrected 'Europe countries' to 'European countries'.

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Overall, the graph provides knowledge that the number of migrants and refugees migrated to Greece in huge population followed by drastic decline in the number of migrants over the years.

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Overall, the graph shows that the number of migrants and refugees who migrated to Greece was initially high, followed by a drastic decline over the years.

Rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

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Initially, people around 150000 moved to Italy in 2014 whereas it slightly decreased next year in 2015 and showed fluctuation over next two year in 2016 and 2017.

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Initially, around 150,000 people moved to Italy in 2014, whereas this number slightly decreased in 2015 and showed fluctuations over the next two years, 2016 and 2017.

Added commas for clarity and corrected 'year' to 'years'.

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Lastly, the least number that migrated to Greece was observed only in 2014 around 50000 in number.

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Lastly, the smallest number of migrants to Greece was observed in 2014, around 50,000.

Rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

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The total number migrants that migrated to spain in 2014 were just same in number of people that moved Greece and spain in the year 2017 which was approximately near to 100000.

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The total number of migrants to Spain in 2014 was the same as the number of people who moved to Greece and Spain in 2017, which was approximately 100,000.

Corrected 'spain' to 'Spain' and rephrased for clarity.

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number of refugees and migrants who have shifted

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number of refugees and migrants who shifted

Use of past simple tense is more appropriate here.

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Italy is the one who receives

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Italy is the one that receives

Use 'that' for countries, not 'who'.

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Spain being the least

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with Spain being the least

Add 'with' for clarity.

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Greece and Spain had less than 100000

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Greece and Spain having less than 100,000

Use gerund form for parallel structure.

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the year with highest

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the year with the highest

Add definite article 'the' before 'highest'.

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Italy has more people migrating

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Italy had more people migrating

Maintain past tense consistency.

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Spain who saw

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Spain, which saw

Use 'which' for countries, not 'who'.

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Overall, the graph is relatively stable except for huge influx of people into Greece in the year 2015.

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Overall, the graph shows relative stability except for a significant influx of people into Greece in 2015.

Improves clarity and formality.

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no country showed any substantial growth in population, they experienced average movement in terms of migration.

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no country showed substantial population growth, experiencing average migration movement.

Enhances conciseness and coherence.