Music Show Ticket Transfer

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It features on of our favorite bands

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It features one of our favorite bands

The correct phrase is 'one of our favorite bands'.

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and particular band is one you have been following quite some time.

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and the particular band is one you have been following for quite some time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'particular band', and 'for' is needed to indicate the duration of time.

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I need entire week to prepare

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I need the entire week to prepare

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'entire week'.

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make most of them

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make the most of them

The phrase should be 'make the most of them' to indicate taking full advantage.

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Hope you this mail find you well.

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I hope this mail finds you well.

The sentence structure is incorrect. The correct form is 'I hope this mail finds you well.'

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It is of 3 hours at the City Center Mall

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It is a 3-hour show at the City Center Mall

The phrase 'of 3 hours' is awkward. The correct expression is 'a 3-hour show'.

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I would have joined but I received an urgent meeting

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I would have joined, but I received an urgent meeting request

A comma is needed before 'but' and 'received an urgent meeting' should be 'received an urgent meeting request'.

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I want to presemt you a ticket to a music show that is going to be conducted over the weekend in the city.

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I would like to give you a ticket for a music show happening this weekend in the city.

The sentence can be made more concise and clear by rephrasing.

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i think it will be a great experince.

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I think it will be a great experience.

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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i have urgent office work.

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I have urgent office work.

The pronoun 'I' should always be capitalized.

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My manager gave me new project

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My manager gave me a new project

The indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'new project'.

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I need to work o ot over the weekend

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I need to work on it over the weekend

The phrase should be 'work on it', not 'work o ot'.

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concert.Let me know how it was

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concert. Let me know how it was

There should be a space after the period.

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I have two tickets for music show this Saturday evening at the City Auditorium.

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I have two tickets for a music show this Saturday evening at the City Auditorium.

Adding 'a' before 'music show' makes the sentence clearer.

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There is a music show which is conducted in the city, and I believe you are aware of it.

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There is a music show which will be conducted in the city, and I believe you are aware of it.

The original sentence uses the present tense 'is conducted' which is not appropriate for a future event. 'Will be conducted' is the correct future tense.

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Rather, I would request you to attend this show.

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Instead, I would like to request you to attend this show.

The word 'rather' is not used correctly in this context. 'Instead' is more appropriate to suggest an alternative action.

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There is an important client meet where it will take up the entire evening of mine this.

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There is an important client meeting which will take up my entire evening.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. 'Client meeting' is the correct noun form and 'which will take up my entire evening' corrects the structure and tense.

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I know you are very much interested in music and a crazy fan of this musician.

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I know you are very interested in music and an avid fan of this musician.

The phrase 'very much interested' can be more concisely expressed as 'very interested', and 'crazy fan' can be more formally expressed as 'avid fan'.

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Hope this surprises you a lot on seeing this singer and musician on stage for a live show.

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I hope you are thrilled to see this singer and musician perform live on stage.

The sentence can be rephrased for clarity and formality by using 'I hope you are thrilled' instead of 'Hope this surprises you a lot'.

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I was contemplating to who I can give these tickets to

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I was contemplating who I could give these tickets to

The correct structure is 'contemplating who I could give these tickets to'.

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I'm preempting some work to overflow during weekend

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I'm anticipating some work to overflow during the weekend

The word 'preempting' is not used correctly in this context. 'Anticipating' is more appropriate, and 'the weekend' requires an article.

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show and show

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show

The phrase 'show and show' seems to be a typographical error and should be corrected to 'show'.

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While I was contemplating to who I can give these tickets to, I remembered you loved Patel Sons and since one of the main attraction of the show is a performance by them, I decided to extend these to you.

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While thinking about whom I could give these tickets to, I remembered your love for Patel Sons. Since they are one of the main attractions of the show, I decided to offer the tickets to you.

The sentence can be made clearer by restructuring it and using more precise language.