Describe a letter you have received in your life.: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

The phrase 'A letter I have received last summer in my entire life' is awkward and grammatically incorrect.

Rephrase to 'A letter I received last summer from my fiancée was very special.'

The sentence 'I always have complained to him about not having a love story which received letters and sending letters.' lacks clarity and correct tense usage.

Use 'I had always complained to him about not having a love story that involved writing and receiving letters.'

The phrase 'it's got kind of old school drama kind of thing' is informal and repetitive.

Replace with 'it has an old-school romantic charm.'

The sentence 'That letter didn't have much of information but it was just a love letter who is very fond of me.' has incorrect word choice and structure.

Use 'The letter didn't contain much information, but it was from someone who is very fond of me.'

The phrase 'there are not much above words he used' is grammatically incorrect.

Rephrase to 'he didn't use many words.'

The sentence 'On one hand, my eyes are filled with tears. On other hand, I was so eager to read the letter' lacks parallel structure.

Use 'On one hand, my eyes were filled with tears; on the other, I was eager to read the letter.'

The phrase 'I was so immensely joy' is grammatically incorrect.

Use 'I was filled with immense joy.'

Repetition of the word 'letter' and the phrase 'felt very happy.'

Try to use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For example, you could use 'note' or 'correspondence' for 'letter' and 'elated' or 'overjoyed' instead of 'felt very happy.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'also.'

Use varied connectors such as 'Moreover,' 'Furthermore,' or 'In addition' to enhance the flow of the narrative.

Lack of cohesive storytelling structure.

Consider structuring the story by starting with the context (past), describing the experience (present), and reflecting on its impact (future). This approach will make the narrative more engaging.

The sentence 'I think in today's world and in today's era letter exchange is quite Not a trend' lacks coherence and has a grammatical error with 'Not' being incorrectly capitalized.

Rephrase to: 'I think in today's world, exchanging letters is not very common.'

The phrase 'during my when I was in sixth standard' is awkward and redundant.

Simplify to: 'when I was in the sixth standard.'

Incorrect tense usage in 'she has she made this card'.

Correct to: 'she made this card.'

Repetition of 'it was kind of emotional also'.

Use: 'it was quite emotional for me.'

The phrase 'it possess on some kind of a human touch' contains a grammatical error.

Correct to: 'it possesses a certain human touch.'

The sentence 'it is one of the most precious thing that I've ever possessed' has a singular/plural error.

Correct to: 'it is one of the most precious things that I've ever possessed.'

The sentence 'I received many letters from my childhood till now but a letter which was very mesmerizing to me is a letter sent by my sister when I passed my class 12th.' lacks coherence and clarity.

Rephrase to improve clarity: 'I have received many letters throughout my life, but one that stands out as particularly mesmerizing was from my sister, congratulating me on passing my class 12th exams.'

The phrase 'it's been almost seven years that letter has been sent to me' is awkward and incorrect in tense.

Use the correct tense: 'It has been almost seven years since I received that letter.'

The response is incomplete and lacks detail.

Expand on the content of the letter, why it was mesmerizing, and how it made you feel. Use descriptive language and structured storytelling.