Describe a piece of equipment you have at home: IELTS Speaking Cue Card

Repetition of words such as 'often used' and 'masalas'.

Try to use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'often used,' you could say 'frequently utilized.'

Incorrect use of 'a mixture powder'.

The correct phrase should be 'a powdered mixture' or simply 'a mixture.'

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and' and 'so'.

Use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'therefore,' 'furthermore,' or 'in addition' to enhance coherence.

Grammatical inconsistency in 'could be often used'.

The correct phrase should be 'is often used' to maintain grammatical consistency.

Use of 'like more masala'.

This phrase is unclear. Consider revising it to 'enhance the flavor with more spices.'

Use of 'a cheaper rate with a reasonable price'.

This is redundant. You could simply say 'at a reasonable price.'

Repetition of words like 'laptop' and 'personal laptop'.

Try to use synonyms or paraphrase to avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'laptop', you could say 'device', 'machine', or 'computer'.

Subject-verb agreement issue in 'Sometime my brother want to take the laptop'.

It should be 'Sometimes my brother wants to take the laptop'. Ensure verbs agree in number with their subjects.

Lack of cohesive devices to improve flow.

Use cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Moreover', 'In addition', or 'Furthermore' to improve the flow of ideas.

Use of 'Likely' instead of 'Usually' or 'Typically'.

'Likely' is not the correct word in this context. Use 'Usually' or 'Typically' to describe habits or routines.

Overuse of simple connectors like 'and'.

Try using varied connectors such as 'besides', 'as well as', or 'in addition to' to enhance the sentence structure.